Around The Lane

Sky's paramount is in spaces in between
Nature's brim and outer black galaxies,
Atop like a chalice in the trees—
The red sun's bliss on moon trapping;
By the midst of stars that seep;
Flowers in sparkling wrath happening
In cold's spring—
And so the wheel's turn-out of dreams;
Heaven by herself seems
A bright sting my eyes keep—
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 8/8/2024 4:59:00 AM
I liked the chalice in the trees. Your imagery is so unique. Wheels turn out of dreams... another one. So much for the reader to picture. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 8/7/2024 8:00:00 PM
There's great movement in this poem, from trees,from sky and into the galaxy. The final lines sings a prayer.this is a remarkable work.
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Date: 8/7/2024 4:51:00 PM
Creative lines penned. Very descriptive of what we see from earth into space in wonder at the beauty to behold. Thank you for sharing these lines with us. Sara K
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Date: 8/7/2024 4:23:00 PM
Some great phrases in here of clever images, Paige.
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Date: 8/7/2024 3:19:00 PM
wonderful imagery, waw this is brilliant yann
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Date: 8/7/2024 12:47:00 PM
Whoa a knife to your wings! What a powerful metaphor! And i love “ black galaxies” brilliant! You are such a gifted soul! Your way with words is truly captivating and soulful! Pleasure reading you .. sending you light always
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