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Around the Garden

Around The Garden ( series) Hi Biscus, What’s new? You seem to be fat. Your leaves nice dark green Trimming bit slack. You won springtime’s race The first that I see Glorious Reds Trumpet to me. Majestic and proud But just for a day Tomorrow you’re gone I guess it’s God’s way.

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Constance La France

Date: 3/17/2010 5:05:00 PM

See, this is the problem, dear heart, my Spring is just beginning, not even a hint of a flower or a leaf, so this is very painful for me to read.. but I love it just the same... love Constance

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/17/2010 6:52:00 AM

What a lovely flower for your garden. Majestic as you said. We had beautiful hibiscus growing in our yard when I was a child. Later in life, I was able to keep some alive in North Florida, too. Jerilynn, here's a little picture gift for you enjoy looking at...one of my photographs. (It needs a little more work and it's upside down, but the flower is beautiful.) http://daneann.redbubble.com/sets/74236/works/3298082-2-fancy-fringed-delight Smiles, Dane Ann

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/16/2010 1:03:00 PM

One of many plants that last for only one day but there beauty is excellent..Great write and a topic that interest many..Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/15/2010 4:27:00 PM

Wonderful conversation ... very vivid in your descriptions too.. onto the next.. luv.. Linda-Marie..