Aroma of a Summer's Dawn

Aroma of a summer's dawn Perfect time to mow the lawn 'Til she smelled the fertilizer ~ Now she's on a tranquilizer

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/25/2022 1:52:00 AM

Fertilizer/ Tranquililzer. -this is a perfect match, and I never realized it! Thank you!

Valsa George

Date: 1/24/2022 7:53:00 PM

Some fertilizers smell awful ! As one with a small garden, I know how it is... though I have never been on a tranquilizer ! :) :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/21/2022 10:00:00 AM

Its all about the senses this day,eh! Yup such things will change or challenge our minds!

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/21/2022 6:41:00 AM

Still, I 'll take the summer! She can keep the tranquilizer!!

Debra L Brown

Date: 1/20/2022 10:23:00 PM

I'd rather smell fertilizer than shovel snow any day of the week. LOl... Excellent penned. Blessings ~ Debra

L Milton Hankins

Date: 1/20/2022 9:33:00 PM

Hmmm...there is never a perfect time to mow the lawn, as far as I'm concerned. So, I pay to have it done! Whee!

Anselmo Boles

Date: 1/20/2022 7:36:00 PM

Hahaha! Atlas fertilizer and a Pfizer tranquilizer, a perfect match! Love how you came up with this Lol couplet G.W.!...ab

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/20/2022 7:39:00 PM

Ain't summer sunrise grand, man?! lol. Thanks, Anselmo.