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Aroma of a Summer's Dawn

Aroma of a summer's dawn
  Perfect time to mow the lawn

'Til she smelled the fertilizer
  ~ Now she's on a tranquilizer

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Caren Krutsinger

January 25, 2022 at 1:52 AM

Fertilizer/ Tranquililzer. -this is a perfect match, and I never realized it! Thank you!

Valsa George

January 24, 2022 at 7:53 PM

Some fertilizers smell awful ! As one with a small garden, I know how it is... though I have never been on a tranquilizer ! :) :)

Kim Rodrigues

January 21, 2022 at 10:00 AM

Its all about the senses this day,eh! Yup such things will change or challenge our minds!

Mike Gentile

January 21, 2022 at 6:41 AM

Still, I 'll take the summer! She can keep the tranquilizer!!

Debra L Brown

January 20, 2022 at 10:23 PM

I'd rather smell fertilizer than shovel snow any day of the week. LOl... Excellent penned. Blessings ~ Debra

L Milton Hankins

January 20, 2022 at 9:33 PM

Hmmm...there is never a perfect time to mow the lawn, as far as I'm concerned. So, I pay to have it done! Whee!

Anselmo Boles

January 20, 2022 at 7:36 PM

Hahaha! Atlas fertilizer and a Pfizer tranquilizer, a perfect match! Love how you came up with this Lol couplet G.W.!...ab

Gershon Wolf

January 20, 2022 at 7:39 PM

Ain't summer sunrise grand, man?! lol. Thanks, Anselmo.

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