Army Cadence

Army Green is all I know (Cadence) I don’t know but I've been told Army green is all I know Left right, left right left Left right, left right left Green is the only color I see Army green is all I know Left right, left right left Left right, left right left The girl back home is cheating on me Army green is all I know Left right, left right left Left right, left right left Don’t want her back she set me free Army green is all I know Left right, left right left Left right, left right left Put her picture in a small paper bag Army green is all I know Left right, left right left Left right, left right left Going to light it on Fire as fast as I can Army green is all I know Left right, left right left Left right, left right left Army green is all I know

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Alexis Y.

Date: 1/3/2019 9:17:00 AM

Hi Bobby, I agree with him below, this has a nice rhythm and flow to it. Thanks for your and good riddance to the chick that didn't realize what she had. Have a good day my friend:-) Alexis

Alexis Y.
Date: 1/3/2019 7:30:00 PM

Lol! Chicks then:-)

Bobby May
Date: 1/3/2019 12:01:00 PM

LOL, there were so many chicks, Thank you my friend

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/2/2019 12:23:00 PM

Very creative. The cadence and the whole poem really blend well together. It works great for me. Hut, two, three, four; Hut, two,... :) gw

Bobby May
Date: 1/2/2019 12:44:00 PM

Thank you but I can't take credit for all of that, I heard them so many times it's old school lol Happy New Year my friend