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I did some research and found some myths and stories about shooting stars..This is based upon some of the stories..I have seen two real live shooting stars or meteoriods in my life..One when I was about seven years old and the other a couple of years ago..The one a couple of years ago was unusual in that it was not even dark but just before twilight..

Spishu, spishu shooting star flies Noisily streaks across night skies Lights life for split second Then wonder if beckons Which one is being called arise Please click on "About This Poem"

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2012 9:24:00 PM

Hey, here is one I missed and I see it won the contest. Congrats to you, sweetie. I enjoyed the info you put with it too.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/21/2012 6:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Tirzah's "Shooting Stars" contest Sara. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 8/21/2012 3:41:00 AM

Sara big congrats on your win...David

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/21/2012 2:36:00 AM

congrats on your win, sara... a unique write!..:) huggs

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 8/20/2012 11:50:00 PM

Awesome and wonderful limerick on stars,Sara...You are a dexterous poet for writing this beautiful piece....Kudos to you,dear friend...Congrats on your superb HM..

Jack Horne

Date: 8/19/2012 8:56:00 AM

loved this clever write, Sara

Watisungla Ao

Date: 8/19/2012 3:53:00 AM

The universe alwz amazed me..good work..beautifully written..with best wishes Watisungla

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/19/2012 2:00:00 AM

another poetic surprise from you, sara!.. enjoyed how you created a different angle on the theme.. winner for sure!..:) huggs!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/18/2012 9:24:00 PM

Fascinating - I've always been interested in stars, particularly shooting stars. Very nice picture you've made for us through words. Thanks for your comment on my poem "Listen -part 1-". Take care and keep up the amazing work. Always, Laura

Len Gasun

Date: 8/18/2012 8:16:00 PM

Just woke up and so nice and wonderful to read this one. I wish you all the best my dearest friend, Sara. Blessed and grace-filled to you!

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/18/2012 5:47:00 PM

Interesting and delightful write my friend! I love shooting stars and I have seen many of them in my life! I'm glad to have seen each and every one of them, not all my wishes came true, but some of them did! Great Work!!

David Williams

Date: 8/18/2012 2:21:00 PM

hi Sara I like this...David