Aries

There once was a proud Aries like me,
whose impatience kept from being free.
But all my pride inside
never had the chance to hide
the goal of winning confidently!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 12:52 PM
Many congratulations Brandee on your win in pd's contest with this sweet Limerick >> James
Brown Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 6:04 AM
Congratulations on your win Brandee in P. D.'S contest "Zodiac Race" Love,Carol
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September 26, 2010 at 7:30 PM
BRANDEE, CoNGRATULATIoNS oN A JoB WELL DoNE, ENJoYED YoUR ENTRY 4 P.D's ZoDIAC CoNTEST. HAVE A BLESSED DAY*luv~SKAT
Roberts Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 9:59 AM
congrats on your win in the contest Brandee
Mehta Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 5:09 AM
Congratulations on this fine win in the contest, Brandee
K. Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 4:30 AM
Congrats Brandee for being in pd's winners' circle :) enjoyed reading this :) -- nikko :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 11:25 PM
Yes, Aries love to win!! A passionate sign. Congratulations!
Sweetheart Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 10:41 PM
Congrats Brandee on your big win in P.D.'s contest .. an awesome write on Aries sign.. enjoy your sweet success this happy Sunday with luv..
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September 25, 2010 at 6:23 PM
Congrarulations, Brandee! Enjoyed your entry,..p.d.
Kendrick Avatar
August 11, 2010 at 2:34 PM
Great write..If for a contest, good luck with this sure winner..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
Mehta Avatar
August 9, 2010 at 6:48 AM
Nice thoughts on Aries, Brandee. Good luck in the contest
Horsman Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 10:55 PM
excellent limerick, good luck in contest. Harry
Gorelick Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 10:43 PM
Go girl..Im rooting for you..BG
Sweetheart Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 9:57 PM
Wonderful Brandee .. this is terrific and good luck ..my second husband was an Aries.. and u nailed it with your words... he had that winning drive and lots of confidence too.. great entry..luv..
Roberts Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 9:56 PM
nice one, good luck in the contest
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