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Are You Skew-Whiff

Are You Skew-Whiff? Are you feeling rather skew-whiff? Awkwardly placed and standing? upside-down back to front inside out topsy - turvy Are your senses damp and unresponsive, Beckoning confusion and despair? Does your heart pound even when there’s nothing exciting there? Forlorn, sorrowful, despondent, You patronise your grief, Focus on your problem, To attain some relief; You keep flitting to your pleasures, Lack, for contemplation, a quiet place, Force your troubles into the backroom, You’re not to dignify your face. Tomorrow is for thinking, Will exist to accommodate, The glumness and the wretchedness, That seems to obliqueness and gloom proliferate. Rhoda Monihan 13th October 2015 For the contest Creative Layouts, sponsor Broken Wings

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Date: 10/27/2015 9:38:00 PM
Rhoda,, Wonderful win. SKAT
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Date: 10/26/2015 9:47:00 AM
Cingrats Rhoda on your well deseved win! Balveen
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Dominique Webb
Date: 10/26/2015 1:08:00 PM
Thanks balveen. Sometimes I have just felt that everything's skew-whiff!
Date: 10/26/2015 1:07:00 AM
Congrats on superb win Rhoda with this wonderful creative layout and poetry!
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Date: 10/25/2015 5:08:00 PM
Very good, Rhoda. Lovely words.
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Date: 10/25/2015 1:08:00 PM
Creative thinking, Rhoda. Our senses are not always so cooperative! Congrats on a merited win. ~ Regards // paul
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Dominique Webb
Date: 10/25/2015 1:43:00 PM
Thanks paul

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