Are You Lonesome Tonight

We stood on this side of the fence
Two boys just biding our time
There was a job that had to be done
That job lay on the other side

I brought the pick ax and shovel
Bobby the tarp and the twine
We synchronized our watches 
Both read a quarter past nine

With the fence now far behind us
We used the cloak of the night
To reach our destination
Behold, such a heavenly sight

So as not to wear ourselves out
We both shared in the work
While one kept steady watch
The other was shoveling dirt

Bobby was the first one to hear it
That glorious heart throbbing THUD
Both of us working the tarp
We rolled our jolly friend up

Wondering if we'd made a mistake
As sirens and flood lights filled the night
For regrets it's much to late
In our rear view the Memphis sky line

The moment we pulled into the drive
There was a great sigh of relief
A job that was well done
The King smiles from the back seat

Can anyone actually blame me 
Or even call it a crime 
When my Granny just wanted to see Elvis
One last time before she died

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 12/6/2018 11:48:00 PM
O Mike - Love your poem. Your grand-mother is so lucky to have two loving grand-sons.
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Date: 6/14/2016 7:51:00 AM
Creative and macabre funny Mike!:) (Poor Elvis, lol!)
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Mike Hauser
Date: 6/14/2016 8:33:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 6/14/2016 7:46:00 AM
Definitely dark humour here Mike lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Mike Hauser
Date: 6/14/2016 8:34:00 AM
Hope it's not too dark!
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