Notes About The Poem
cat eyeCats have a pupil that is vertically shaped that helps them in night vision..It can look scary because it is different..Chatoyant means changing in luster or light..Displaying a band of light reflected off inclusions of other minerals like the way a diamond reflects light..

Are You Brave

The cats' chatoyant eyes reflected fear
As the darkness of night penetrated 
Everything, even small lamp that's near
The fear grew as the dogs snarled and hated

The dark fog shrouded woods did not draw one
Come, come into this inviting dark place
Sit stay no these woods say run quickly son
Drawn adventurous person to this space

Where cat's chatoyant eyes reflected fear
Noises from screech owls, coyotes, and bobcats
Rule the night with the dark woods very near
Drawn called come here to where flight of bats

Stirs the cool damp night's air and shadows creep
Filled with eyes, sounds, stirrings of animals
And menacing things, sounds of peeps, stirring feet
Only brave can enter for this could be fatal

Well, are you brave?

Was written for PD contest that closed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Johnson Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 6:19 PM
Down here our puddy cats sometimes go a hunting, catch a rabbit big ol rats, an brown snakes really something, great poem here Sara K
Effendi Avatar
November 25, 2011 at 9:31 PM
WOW! You've really described it well, Sara. Good going.
Maverick Avatar
November 25, 2011 at 10:51 AM
Wellll...i'm not so sure Sara not after reading this write anyways:)
Math Avatar
November 24, 2011 at 12:46 AM
I love this, nicely done Sara ;) keep going with writing, it's your specialty :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 23, 2011 at 6:14 PM
I liked all that animalistic imagery, Sara. Too bad it didn't get entered.I have been here all afternoon. I 'm going to just stay upstairs now.haha. Luv, Andrea
Horne Avatar
November 23, 2011 at 3:03 PM
Lovely write, my friend - what a pity the contest had filled
Wesley Avatar
November 23, 2011 at 9:11 AM
Sorry you missed getting it in for the contest. We can't rush these things though and I always enjoy your poems whether contest material or not. I think I wouldn't be brave in this scene.
Rhinem Avatar
November 22, 2011 at 3:50 PM
Smile, Upon My Own Accord I Would Being More Honest Than Say No * Yet, Aside This The Lines Of Truth To Be Found In Between * I Am, Eternal * Kind Of Spooky Unto A Little Ol' Kitty Cat Like Me * My Luv, Always & Forever, John!:) *
Lane Avatar
November 22, 2011 at 2:43 PM
I just did that with one yesterday. Too late. Nice read, good work. Tony
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November 22, 2011 at 1:21 PM
Dear Sara, I'm sorry you didn't finish this in time to enter it in PD's contest because I know it would have been a winner. Very descriptive and scary images, but yes, I am brave. We put our lives in God's hands and meet the challenges. Love, Carolyn
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