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cat eyeCats have a pupil that is vertically shaped that helps them in night vision..It can look scary because it is different..Chatoyant means changing in luster or light..Displaying a band of light reflected off inclusions of other minerals like the way a diamond reflects light..
The cats' chatoyant eyes reflected fear As the darkness of night penetrated Everything, even small lamp that's near The fear grew as the dogs snarled and hated The dark fog shrouded woods did not draw one Come, come into this inviting dark place Sit stay no these woods say run quickly son Drawn adventurous person to this space Where cat's chatoyant eyes reflected fear Noises from screech owls, coyotes, and bobcats Rule the night with the dark woods very near Drawn called come here to where flight of bats Stirs the cool damp night's air and shadows creep Filled with eyes, sounds, stirrings of animals And menacing things, sounds of peeps, stirring feet Only brave can enter for this could be fatal Well, are you brave? Was written for PD contest that closed

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Date: 12/1/2011 6:19:00 PM
Down here our puddy cats sometimes go a hunting, catch a rabbit big ol rats, an brown snakes really something, great poem here Sara K
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Date: 11/25/2011 9:31:00 PM
WOW! You've really described it well, Sara. Good going.
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Date: 11/25/2011 10:51:00 AM
Wellll...i'm not so sure Sara not after reading this write anyways:)
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Date: 11/24/2011 12:46:00 AM
I love this, nicely done Sara ;) keep going with writing, it's your specialty :)
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Date: 11/23/2011 6:14:00 PM
I liked all that animalistic imagery, Sara. Too bad it didn't get entered.I have been here all afternoon. I 'm going to just stay upstairs now.haha. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/23/2011 3:03:00 PM
Lovely write, my friend - what a pity the contest had filled
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Date: 11/23/2011 9:11:00 AM
Sorry you missed getting it in for the contest. We can't rush these things though and I always enjoy your poems whether contest material or not. I think I wouldn't be brave in this scene.
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Date: 11/22/2011 3:50:00 PM
Smile, Upon My Own Accord I Would Being More Honest Than Say No * Yet, Aside This The Lines Of Truth To Be Found In Between * I Am, Eternal * Kind Of Spooky Unto A Little Ol' Kitty Cat Like Me * My Luv, Always & Forever, John!:) *
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Date: 11/22/2011 2:43:00 PM
I just did that with one yesterday. Too late. Nice read, good work. Tony
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Date: 11/22/2011 1:21:00 PM
Dear Sara, I'm sorry you didn't finish this in time to enter it in PD's contest because I know it would have been a winner. Very descriptive and scary images, but yes, I am brave. We put our lives in God's hands and meet the challenges. Love, Carolyn
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