Ardor

An ardor for poetic expression penned
Those emotion filled romantic lines drew
Passion reaching forth sweet love uncondemned
Armour poured out 'pon pages like morn's dew 

Christ's passion far surpasses human's love
With patience He looked down 'pon man and earth
Patiently waited coming as the Dove
Amazing grace would transcend with His birth

Passion waited for eons and eons
Patiently longing to redeem mankind
Creatures whom He loved for generations
He waits now for them to His will aligned

Blood poured forth 'pon sad Golgotha's hill
Passion's patience whispers come of own freewill

finis'

Sponsor: Dr. Ram Mehta
Contest: Passion Pays, Not Patience
Passion without character trait of patience can result in a disaster.....
Written: This September 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Roberts Avatar
September 23, 2013 at 12:58 AM
Congratulations ....Seren
Lamoureux Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 9:32 PM
Fantastic piece, so well expressed. Congratulations.
A   Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 8:41 PM
a nice winning poem Sara... goodnight...Linda
Maverick Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 3:36 PM
Yes how often do people consider how much raw passion Christ displayed for lost mankind..' Congrats on winning.!
Richards Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 9:09 AM
The only poem here, that pours with faith and passion of His love. Perfectly done, Sara!! Congratulations!
Adams Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 8:52 AM
beautiful, inspiration sonnet...congrats on your win :)
Hamilton Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 7:53 AM
congrats on being placed Shadow x smile
Mehta Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 7:14 AM
Congrats on the win in my contest, Sara, with this lovely sonnet
Anglesey Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 8:27 PM
Lovely sonnet and inspiring message.
Situation Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 12:15 PM
I'd prefer morning's dew. But it's a great start.
Horsman Avatar
September 11, 2013 at 8:58 AM
this is lovely cannot wait for the finish...
Onclaud Avatar
September 10, 2013 at 2:16 PM
designed to last through the glory of the One, sara... i will see this through.. so divine!..:) huggs
A   Avatar
September 10, 2013 at 10:03 AM
amazing it is Sara, a joy of light reading your poem...Linda
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