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Arctic Blast

Winter dons his scarf of white and lets his snowflakes gently fall Adorning the trees in snowy delight As his cold winds come to call At times he'll send an arctic blast To make us shiver and shake With icy fingers a cold spell is cast and there's a freeze upon the lake But when he conjures up too much snow He transforms into a wizard As he makes a fierce wind blow and buries us in a blizzard! 1-16-2023 12 Lines of Rhyme-Winter Nature Themed Poetry Contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Date: 1/25/2023 11:01:00 PM
A winter wonderland, Joseph, till he over does it. Brilliant. Love it. Harry
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Date: 1/25/2023 10:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. Cold days need some hot chocolate. Have a great day..............
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Date: 1/25/2023 6:04:00 AM
Love the magic in this chilly write Joseph. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 1/24/2023 6:19:00 PM
Joe, a sweet winter poem, great rhymes and a cute ending, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Date: 1/25/2023 5:11:00 AM
Thank you for my placement Tania
Date: 1/20/2023 5:55:00 PM
love this personification poem. GREAT job.
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Date: 1/19/2023 1:33:00 AM
Winter the wizard bringing blizzard ! I love it. Beautiful penning on the biting chill of winter.
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Date: 1/18/2023 8:20:00 PM
Such splendid imagery you use, Joseph:) very well writ:)
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Date: 1/17/2023 2:57:00 PM
This shows it so well. Great one Joseph. Well done :)
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Date: 1/17/2023 10:21:00 AM
Very well done! Brr…
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Date: 1/17/2023 9:43:00 AM
Snow can be as devastating as water and fire, an avalanche can be catastrophic and I marvel at rescuers sometimes finding skiers involved in avalanches, alive. Excellent and enjoyable poem Joseph. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/17/2023 5:52:00 AM
I'll stay in the South. No thank you to frigid climates. Nice writing, Joseph.
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Date: 1/17/2023 2:20:00 AM
Great description of a wintry day. Malta is relatively warmer though the weekend spells lots of rain.
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Date: 1/16/2023 6:04:00 PM
"He transforms into a wizard, and buries us in a blizzard!" Even though this thought brings a smile, because it's cute- you speak so much truth, Joseph. Winter is wonderful, in its own way, but the warmer weather, I certainly enjoy. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 1/16/2023 11:55:00 AM
Alluring and challenging; two opposing sides of a cyclical season distinctly described in your poem. The Yin and Yang of life. Nicely done, Joseph!...ab
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Date: 1/16/2023 9:19:00 AM
Great and picturesque. Reading it I am shivering with cold.
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Date: 1/16/2023 8:56:00 AM
Beautiful imagery of winter. I like the tone and flow of your poem, Joseph.
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Date: 1/16/2023 8:42:00 AM
Blizzards, snow and arctic blasts make me shiver, Joseph! Luckily, our Maltese winters are quite acceptable when compared to yours. Regards // paul
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Date: 1/16/2023 8:01:00 AM
I can feel the chill in your verse Joseph, a winter blast is forecast here in the uk. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
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