Arcadia

Rigid around the edges
Behold blissful paradise
A spring not yet discovered
graceful earth divine

-MIRANDA LAMBERT-
1ST PLACE IN DODOITSU CONTEST 2/23/11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Austin Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 2:15 PM
Shades of Shangri La. Good dreaming. Congrats on the selection. daver
Brown Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 11:26 AM
Congrats on your featured poem this week Randa. Love, Carol
Haick Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 9:11 PM
Congratulations on you fine Ist Place Win in John's Contest, Miranda. Always, Annalise
Kendrick Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 4:55 PM
Creative work that has won..Congrats..Sara
Brown Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 6:22 AM
Congratulations on this outstanding poem placing 1st in John's contest Miranda. Love, Carol
La France Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 3:16 AM
congratulations on your win.
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 11:54 PM
love that , a sping not yet discovered! Congrats on your big win, Miranda.
Freeman Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 6:30 PM
Extremely happy to see you at the top Miranda. Congratulations on your worthy poem's first place honor, Agape, Moses
Pettit Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 2:36 PM
A dodoitsu written well. Very descriptive for just four lines.
Guzzi Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 1:12 PM
I can almost hear this being sung! Please enter it into my contest We Aren't Japanese but Please. Light & Love
Mehta Avatar
February 21, 2011 at 9:49 AM
Nice creative Dodoitsu, Miranda
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