Ar Strong Rehab Centre

She pushes my wheelchair
   Rolling me past the nurses station
     Rolling me down the long bright hallway
    Rolls me into the room with all those machines 
 All I want to do is go for a   l o n g  w a l k  _  —  _  — _  —  _  — _  — _



For Julia Ward’s Rehabilitation contest.
Written May 24th 2018.

AR Strong has assisted many people on their road to recovery.
A great facility in Vancouver Canada.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 9/8/2018 7:50:00 AM
Dont know why but the way you wrote it kinda anchoring it on that popping end of sentence hit me man, the human condition...simple no flash and potent as they come
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Date: 7/4/2018 8:59:00 AM
Hi Richard, this is an excellent write. It is wonderful that there are such places for people, such wonderful people working within them. This one is a fave Richard. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 6/5/2018 3:25:00 PM
A beautiful poem which prompts the reader to stop and think of the problems of others. That last line strikes home (especially if there is no hope of ever walking again!). Regards // paul
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Date: 6/1/2018 10:08:00 PM
Back with much deserved congrats, Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/2/2018 7:55:00 AM
Thanks Line.
Date: 6/1/2018 8:26:00 PM
Moving (No pun intended) and insightful. Lovely.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/2/2018 7:55:00 AM
Thanks Brian.
Date: 5/31/2018 7:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/2/2018 8:00:00 AM
Thanks Susan.
Date: 5/31/2018 6:31:00 PM
I read this when you first posted it, loved it then, love it now, Winning wishes Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/2/2018 8:00:00 AM
Thanks for dropping back.
Date: 5/31/2018 4:37:00 PM
Congrats Rich :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/2/2018 8:12:00 AM
Thanks Natasha.
Date: 5/31/2018 4:05:00 PM
Congratulations on a great win, Rhichard.. hugs eve
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/2/2018 8:12:00 AM
Thanks Eve.
Date: 5/31/2018 3:33:00 PM
Back with congratulations Richard.well done. Tom
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/2/2018 8:16:00 AM
Thanks Tom.
Date: 5/31/2018 3:02:00 PM
It's so visually appealing! The repetition of rolling and then staying with that theme earned you a win in my contest. Well done, Richard. Julia, :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/2/2018 8:07:00 AM
Thanks for choosing my poem.
Date: 5/30/2018 7:04:00 PM
You raise the voice of poetry to get embraced in our very world.. the world of beauty, words, dreams to daily hustles and constraints.. A work of beauty! Stay safe.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/30/2018 7:18:00 PM
Thanks for spending some time visiting my poetry. You brought me a smile through your kind comments.
Date: 5/29/2018 5:52:00 PM
It's good to know there are organizations like AR Strong to help people heal. Your poem made me smile -- especially the "tracks" at the end. Best wishes in the contest, Richard. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 5/29/2018 8:41:00 AM
BRILLIANT, Richard....So much said with so few words. Elaine
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/29/2018 12:45:00 PM
Thanks Elaine.
Date: 5/29/2018 8:19:00 AM
Good luck in the contest dear. I can't even imagine what it must be like to not be in charge of one's full mobility. Soup mail.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/29/2018 12:46:00 PM
Thanks, on my way to soup mail.
Date: 5/28/2018 2:58:00 AM
nice free verse for a long walk
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/28/2018 7:58:00 AM
Thanks Muhammad.
Date: 5/27/2018 11:05:00 AM
This seems perfect for her contest - that's my humble opinion. Enjoyed it and glad that I do not need such, very glad, a blessing to count. You done good, Richard. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/28/2018 7:59:00 AM
Me too. I have a friend who lost a leg in a car accident when he was 16. With their help he is walking again.
Date: 5/26/2018 3:05:00 PM
- Sounds like a wonderful place ... when we need it - Luck in the contest, Richard - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/27/2018 9:47:00 AM
You too Anne-Lise. Hugs back.
Date: 5/26/2018 12:30:00 PM
Clever poetry Richard..
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/27/2018 9:47:00 AM
Thanks Silent.
Date: 5/26/2018 10:40:00 AM
I love the brevity of this one and what it is telling us. Hope you win!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/27/2018 9:50:00 AM
Thanks Andrea.
Date: 5/26/2018 9:23:00 AM
Great imagery in this poem Rick. Totally agree, wish that walk was longer for him. Good to know that you have such a fine Rehab center. good luck in the contest....Maria hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/27/2018 9:51:00 AM
Ypthanks and a big hug Maria.
Date: 5/26/2018 8:02:00 AM
Hi Richard, It's so good to hear about the AR Strong Rehab Centre. Based on your poem it sounds like they are doing good work. Good poem by the way. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/26/2018 8:09:00 AM
Thanks Alexis. Yes they do great work. Mostly with brain injury and spinal chord. Some Amputations.
Date: 5/25/2018 5:18:00 PM
a long walk is the best therapy, rich... written with affection and grit.. huggs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/26/2018 8:12:00 AM
Hi Nette, this fellow is paralyzed so his expectations will have to be adjusted. I don’t know how I would cope under those circumstances. Hugs Rick.
Date: 5/25/2018 3:49:00 PM
I liked this, very compassionate.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/26/2018 8:13:00 AM
Thanks Arthur.
Date: 5/25/2018 1:53:00 PM
Places like that do make a huge difference to peoples lives, gives them real hope for the future. Long may they continue.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/26/2018 8:14:00 AM
So true Tom.
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