April Showers Sun and Flowers

Anacreontic Verse

I sit silent
within this moment
Not knowing
If you are willing
To touch me
in a way
that truly matters
For I need you
To caress my skin
For it has been
a long winter
of wanting
My skin glistens
April fresh
showered clean
for this reunion
Within my longing
My spirit knows
You don't sense my need
Although you feel close
There is a distance
Unmeasurable
Around your red glow
I feel sad blue
Please tell me
Why you keep hiding
Please break through dark clouds
gift me your yellow
Kiss me now
So that I "May" bloom!




Anacreontic Verse Three for Edward Ebb's contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Callus Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 4:18 PM
Pleased to be back reading this poem once again, Richard. Also congratulations for a merited podium finish! ~ Regards // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 9:36 AM
Thanks Paul, have a wonderful weekend my friend.
Haight Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 4:03 PM
Richard, congratulations on your nice placement in the Anacreontic verse contest! Sandra
Lamoureux Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 8:57 AM
Thanks Sandra.
Scars Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 1:05 PM
Richard, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
Lamoureux Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 8:57 AM
Much appreciated Laura.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 8:57 AM
Much appreciated Laura.
Smith Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 11:13 AM
Congratulations Richard, well done...
Lamoureux Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 8:57 AM
Thanks Charlie.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 8:56 AM
Thanks Charlie.
Allison Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 6:59 AM
Beautiful metaphor Richard - love your take on the theme:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Lamoureux Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 8:01 AM
Thanks and a big hug.
Manassian Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 4:17 AM
I have missed you....I'm unable to write of late. Nothing comes to mind that I can catch and put down in words...Thanks for the visit today. Hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 6:13 AM
Super busy at this end with trying to sell our home and build a new one at Mikinley Beach. I as well have lacked inspiration of late.. Hugs Rick.
Hicks Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 11:37 PM
What a tantalizing metaphor for love and desire. She is the life-force and your reason for life. You expressed it so well.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 8:01 AM
Thanks Timothy.
Muideen Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 3:12 PM
Wow! This is hyper-excellence. It flows like lyric and well expressed. Great piece........A.M.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 8:02 AM
Thanks A.M.
La France Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 4:16 PM
Richard, I love your take on this contest, wonderfully penned ~
Lamoureux Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 8:02 AM
Thanks Constance.
Manassian Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 3:08 PM
This is beyond beautiful...romantic with a taste of sensual. I LOVE IT...especially since I'm a May baby...
Lamoureux Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 6:10 AM
Thanks Eileen, you share a birthday with another great lady!
Dietrich Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 12:59 PM
love the amazing way you did this one . It's so creative. Gotta put my thinking cap on now . This is one of the few challenges I have not undertaken yet!! this is a SEVEN
Callus Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 12:36 PM
Winter and spring are two important stages in a person's relationship. Now is the time to cross from one to the other, romantically; change is in the air! // paul
Gazbowski Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 10:06 AM
A delightful and romantic write.
Chircop Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 9:47 AM
Give me your yellow /kids me now so I may bloom. Exceptional line.A poem oozing with romance and desire..WOW !
Chircop Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 9:48 AM
Kiss me I meant not Kids me..Got confused : )
Smith Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 8:22 AM
You know someone so well you can sense any changes. This reflects the true gentleman that you are Richard. I hope you do well in the contest.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 9:12 AM
Hi Tim, I hope you are right. Thanks for the visit.
Underwood Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 6:22 AM
A lovely romantic write Richard
Lamoureux Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 8:14 AM
Thanks Gail.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 3:58 AM
I really love the romance in this piece. That longing to be touched. It is beautiful Richard! It should do great in the contest. # 7. ; )
Lamoureux Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 8:15 AM
Thanks Connie, I appreciate the visit.
Vaso Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 8:33 PM
I read this a few times, a suggestive, romantic, endearing love poem. and for me A7! :)
Lamoureux Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 8:16 AM
Thanks Arthur. I'm pleased you enjoyed it.
Nance Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 7:57 AM
I like the demands of the last line.. kiss me now! like it is going to make the blue just disappear and you know it, it is a strong ending. This poem feels the longing, the wanting, and the desire to make everything alright. :)
Lamoureux Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 8:05 AM
I am not that familiar with the form so I hope I got it right.
A. Sharma Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 5:23 AM
wonderful images n great poetry here Richard.. a sure winner.. best wishes.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 7:52 AM
Thanks Upma, I hope you are right.
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