Valsa George Poet Monchielle Stanza

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April Showers and Spring Flowers

 April showers now bring
Roses and fragrant blooms
The charm of verdant spring
In breeze, the flowers nod
What joy these blossoms bring.
	
April showers now bring
Daisies and daffodils
In neat floral display
On the craggy hilltops
In beauteous array
	
April showers now bring
A carpet of green grass
Over the barren land
With a spread of small blooms
A sight so fair and grand

April showers now bring
Green loveliness to earth
Bunnies and bees surprise,
With their smart, playful moves
What grand feast to our eyes!


Placed Third

April.11.2022
All April in Monchielle Poetry Contest
Sponsor-Andrea Dietrich 

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Sara Kendrick May 4, 2022 at 3:12 AM Congrats on this great winning work in Andrea's Monchielle Contest. WTG. I enjoyed reading it. Sara

Sam Kauffman May 3, 2022 at 1:49 PM Congratulations Valsa! This is like stepping into a rain shower holding bouquets of beauty that refreshes and renews all of life - even us! Wonderfully done! Blessings for your spring!

Eve Roper May 1, 2022 at 6:16 PM Congratulations on a wonderful write in Andrea's contest. Blessings to you

Christuraj Alex May 1, 2022 at 7:32 AM "Green loveliness" - Great! Congratulations!

Sotto Poet April 30, 2022 at 2:50 PM Valsa, it was a pleasure to read your poem for the second time, and congratulations on your well-deserved win. Even though I had hoped for a higher placing.

Andrea Dietrich April 30, 2022 at 2:42 PM Marvelous organization of your ideas on what April showers bring!! I really enjoyed this one. Big congrats on the win.

Bill Baker April 14, 2022 at 4:48 PM A lovely spring poem, my friend. Your imagery was a pleasure to read. Hugs, Bill

Caren Krutsinger April 12, 2022 at 2:17 PM This one is a winner for any contest.

JC Brul April 12, 2022 at 5:02 AM Oh so beautiful! Such a captivating imagery that only your pen can bring!! So much loveliness in this gem! A sure winner!!

Anil Deo April 11, 2022 at 9:56 PM This is sure a fun FORM. Enjoyed the spring showers, even as Aprilbgeralds Holy Week, the heights and depths of human thinking/ hearts. Shalom shalom blessings

Silpika Kalita April 11, 2022 at 8:11 PM I never tried Monchille stanza, so aesthetic and brilliantly composed with the vibrant season's euphonic artistic glory at the peak , given any canvas, you can paint with any colour. Best wishes Valsa Valsa George April 11, 2022 at 8:53 PM This is too much of a recognition given to me as a poet that I don't quite deserve ! However so happy for your visit and wonderful comment, Silpika !

Sotto Poet April 11, 2022 at 6:43 PM Valsa, you've written a beautiful and lovely dedication to April. Beautiful illustrations of the revelry in April. Your proficiency in writing is evident. Best wishes for the contest dear friend.

Rico Leffanta April 11, 2022 at 11:12 AM April in Paris is famous for its showers, but so few enjoy them in the beautiful parks, where children are looking for that bunny with all the coloured eggs . . . . Nice one, Valsa! Aloha! Valsa George April 11, 2022 at 6:04 PM When outdoors , especially in parks, rain is hardly enjoyed !Thanks a lot Rico....

Vijay Pandit April 11, 2022 at 5:07 AM Wonderfully enchanting ode to April, Valsa. Splendid images of April revelry. Your skilled pen shines. Valsa George April 11, 2022 at 6:12 AM I just wrote one.... ! Wasn't very confident ! Your approval is gratefully received....

Victor Buhagiar April 11, 2022 at 1:52 AM Now is the time when there will be no rain and some of my plants may die. A lovely om on April. Best for a win. Valsa George April 11, 2022 at 1:57 AM These days we are getting regular rains in the evenings ! My plants were almost dying. Now they look so fresh ! Thanks a lot Victor !

Harry Horsman April 11, 2022 at 1:30 AM A poem, that enhances April and its importance to the cycle we call, year. A pleasure to read this, Valsa. Valsa George April 11, 2022 at 1:52 AM Thank you so much harry for your kind visit and lovely comment.

Tom Cunningham April 11, 2022 at 12:06 AM I never mind a few spring showers because it brings new life to our otherwise barren landscape. Have a great week Valsa. Tom Valsa George April 11, 2022 at 1:55 AM A few spring showers enliven the earth (here parched) facilitating the plants and flowers to come out in robust growth... ! Thanks a lot Tom.