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April showers now bring Roses and fragrant blooms The charm of verdant spring In breeze, the flowers nod What joy these blossoms bring. April showers now bring Daisies and daffodils In neat floral display On the craggy hilltops In beauteous array April showers now bring A carpet of green grass Over the barren land With a spread of small blooms A sight so fair and grand April showers now bring Green loveliness to earth Bunnies and bees surprise, With their smart, playful moves What grand feast to our eyes! Placed Third April.11.2022 All April in Monchielle Poetry Contest Sponsor-Andrea Dietrich

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Date: 5/4/2022 3:12:00 AM
Congrats on this great winning work in Andrea's Monchielle Contest. WTG. I enjoyed reading it. Sara
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Date: 5/3/2022 1:49:00 PM
Congratulations Valsa! This is like stepping into a rain shower holding bouquets of beauty that refreshes and renews all of life - even us! Wonderfully done! Blessings for your spring!
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Date: 5/1/2022 6:16:00 PM
Congratulations on a wonderful write in Andrea's contest. Blessings to you
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Date: 5/1/2022 7:32:00 AM
"Green loveliness" - Great! Congratulations!
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Date: 4/30/2022 2:50:00 PM
Valsa, it was a pleasure to read your poem for the second time, and congratulations on your well-deserved win. Even though I had hoped for a higher placing.
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Date: 4/30/2022 2:42:00 PM
Marvelous organization of your ideas on what April showers bring!! I really enjoyed this one. Big congrats on the win.
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Date: 4/14/2022 4:48:00 PM
A lovely spring poem, my friend. Your imagery was a pleasure to read. Hugs, Bill
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Date: 4/12/2022 2:17:00 PM
This one is a winner for any contest.
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Date: 4/12/2022 5:02:00 AM
Oh so beautiful! Such a captivating imagery that only your pen can bring!! So much loveliness in this gem! A sure winner!!
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Date: 4/11/2022 9:56:00 PM
This is sure a fun FORM. Enjoyed the spring showers, even as Aprilbgeralds Holy Week, the heights and depths of human thinking/ hearts. Shalom shalom blessings
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Date: 4/11/2022 8:11:00 PM
I never tried Monchille stanza, so aesthetic and brilliantly composed with the vibrant season's euphonic artistic glory at the peak , given any canvas, you can paint with any colour. Best wishes Valsa
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Date: 4/11/2022 8:53:00 PM
This is too much of a recognition given to me as a poet that I don't quite deserve ! However so happy for your visit and wonderful comment, Silpika !
Date: 4/11/2022 6:43:00 PM
Valsa, you've written a beautiful and lovely dedication to April. Beautiful illustrations of the revelry in April. Your proficiency in writing is evident. Best wishes for the contest dear friend.
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Date: 4/11/2022 11:12:00 AM
April in Paris is famous for its showers, but so few enjoy them in the beautiful parks, where children are looking for that bunny with all the coloured eggs . . . . Nice one, Valsa! Aloha!
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Date: 4/11/2022 6:04:00 PM
When outdoors , especially in parks, rain is hardly enjoyed !Thanks a lot Rico....
Date: 4/11/2022 5:07:00 AM
Wonderfully enchanting ode to April, Valsa. Splendid images of April revelry. Your skilled pen shines.
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Date: 4/11/2022 6:12:00 AM
I just wrote one.... ! Wasn't very confident ! Your approval is gratefully received....
Date: 4/11/2022 1:52:00 AM
Now is the time when there will be no rain and some of my plants may die. A lovely om on April. Best for a win.
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Date: 4/11/2022 1:57:00 AM
These days we are getting regular rains in the evenings ! My plants were almost dying. Now they look so fresh ! Thanks a lot Victor !
Date: 4/11/2022 1:30:00 AM
A poem, that enhances April and its importance to the cycle we call, year. A pleasure to read this, Valsa.
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Date: 4/11/2022 1:52:00 AM
Thank you so much harry for your kind visit and lovely comment.
Date: 4/11/2022 12:06:00 AM
I never mind a few spring showers because it brings new life to our otherwise barren landscape. Have a great week Valsa. Tom
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Date: 4/11/2022 1:55:00 AM
A few spring showers enliven the earth (here parched) facilitating the plants and flowers to come out in robust growth... ! Thanks a lot Tom.

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