April Showers and Flowers

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April showers just fetch rainbow of hues for mirth clues and balms everywhere as man's heart with its dearth bees humming must beware! April showers just fetch blossoms in varied scales moths fly high in the air with sinus-tickling wails birds hoard eat seeds with care April showers just fetch life booming all around shun teasing the bird-thrush worms crawling can be found on your boots will rise mush April showers just fetch a flooring of fresh lawn may blooms are on the way bear ageless hope to bring cheer look forward to May. 5TH PLACE CONTEST WINNER Written: April 11, 2022 ALL APRIL in MONCHIELLE Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/3/2022 1:55:00 PM

Lasaad, your poem literally dances with the whimsy of spring and hope! So much fun to read! Congratulations on your win! Blessings for your spring days!

Eve Roper

Date: 5/1/2022 6:24:00 PM

Congratulations on a wonderful write in Andrea's contest. Blessings to you

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/1/2022 4:48:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work in Andrea's contest. Way to go. April's showers can be good or bad just according how much we get of them. It helps the plants grow which produces pollen but also washes some of it away briefly. I enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for dropping by with congrats on mine. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2022 3:05:00 PM

Enjoyed your poem, Sotto. Thanks for participating and congrats on your win.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/12/2022 2:22:00 PM

This is a reminder of my spring allergies "moths fly high in the air with sinus-tickling wails" but the poem is lovely and the worms make sense.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/12/2022 7:37:00 AM

Hello Scotto - Hi. This is very much poetry. It is so smooth and flowing and gentle which is all easy to the eye and ear. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Best of luck with the contest. Keep enjoying poetrysoup.