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April Showers

The Showers fall gently
giving all plants a drink
it is watering time
pretty flowers in pink
wow back ground of key lime  



The Showers fall gently
are they God's loving tears
is He happy or sad
showers wash away fears
He is our loving Dad



Date Written: 4/12/2022

4 Place

ALL APRIL in MONCHIELLE Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/4/2022 3:20:00 AM

Congrats on this great winning work in Andrea's Monchielle Contest. WTG. I enjoyed reading it. Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/4/2022 8:57:00 AM

Thanks for your reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you enjoyed my April Showers. Have a Great/Blessed day................

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/3/2022 1:58:00 PM

Amen Paula. So charming with an eloquent touch! Love the question! Congratulations Paula! Blessings!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/4/2022 8:56:00 AM

Thanks for your reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you love my question. Makes one think. Have a Great/Blessed day................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2022 2:54:00 PM

Paula, this is so adorable. The imagery of a key lime background and the last stanza asking about God's tears, those were so cute!! congrats in my contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/4/2022 8:54:00 AM

Thanks for your reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win with my "April Showers" in your wonderful contest. Glad you like this write and my ending with God's tears. Have a Great/Blessed day................

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/30/2022 2:44:00 PM

I really liked reading your poetry, Paula, and congratulations on your well-deserved win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/4/2022 8:50:00 AM

Thanks for your reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this write. Have a Great/Blessed day................

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 4/17/2022 5:07:00 AM

Hello Paula, just popped in to do some reading. Wow, you have been busy writing...Delice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/17/2022 8:46:00 AM

Thanks for your reading/writing. Glad you like my April Showers. Some weeks I have more time. Have a Great/Blessed Easter..............

Valsa George

Date: 4/15/2022 9:45:00 PM

The April rain bathes the plants fresh and they bloom in all pretty shades ! Congratulations dear Paula ! Have a Blessed Easter ! Much love to you !

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/16/2022 3:05:00 PM

Thanks for your reading/writing. Glad you like this April Showers write. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/15/2022 3:15:00 PM

The rains nurturing all of nature is certain evidence of God's love. A lovely poem on April showers, Paula. Best of luck in the contest, Evelyn

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/16/2022 3:04:00 PM

Thanks for your reading/writing and for your best of luck. Glad you like this write. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/15/2022 1:44:00 PM

Downpours and wildflowers provide April's happiness, and Paula you have composed a wonderful poem about it. GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/16/2022 3:01:00 PM

Thanks for your reading/writing and for your good luck. Glad you like this one. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/15/2022 11:03:00 AM

Abba Father indeed! He gives rain to the good and wicked. One delights in Him! Happy Easter!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/16/2022 2:50:00 PM

Thanks for your reading/writing. Glad you like this write. Yes, "He gives rain to the good and wicked." Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............