April Rains

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Yalto
Invented by Edward Ibeh: line 1 to 15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5, no rhyme required.

daffodils dandelions snowdrops and crocuses spontaneously sprout as warm breezes melt the snow setting frozen creeks and rivers free for fish to spawn as colorful flowers bloom in spring’s April rains (Yalto) 06/11/2020

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 6/23/2020 5:28:00 PM

Superb, imagery-heavy Yalto, Emile:-) I thoroughly enjoyed it!

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/23/2020 9:04:00 PM

Thanks Edward, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/12/2020 12:19:00 PM

Beautiful Spring imagery, Emile. This form.has given us some wonderful poetry to cherish. Happy Friday, my friend, Rhonda xx

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/12/2020 2:50:00 PM

Thanks Rhonda, your comments are like a ray of sunshine my friend, Emile.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/11/2020 12:51:00 PM

Love this! Well done! I can almost feel things come to life!

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/11/2020 12:57:00 PM

Thanks Kim, I'm going stir crazy stuck in my condo...a splash of spring helps brighten the day my friend, Emile.