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Appreciation

Without memory there can be no insight. Without love, there can be no appreciation.
Anne Rice

From the deepest recesses of the crowded hall
Came a thunderous applause that shook the walls
An artist par excellence was on stage taking a last bow
For four and forty years he had regaled the audience with his
High-octane performances and sonorous dialogues
He was a master of his craft, a consummate artist
When he sang, little fairies danced in the air

When he spoke, angels would gather to listen to
The most heavenly and articulate voice ever
Whenever on stage he eclipsed others
His performances bringing coolness to the eyes
His magical voice poured nectar into the ears
Desperate to be soothed from the jarring sounds of modern music
The God of Music would listen, appreciating every nuance
Today, was no different, it was an act beyond compare
Far exceeding the expectations of an indulgent audience
Overflowing the balconies.

There was acting, singing, comedy, and serious moments
It didn’t matter if there wasn’t enough seating for all
It didn’t matter if the air-conditioning was struggling
To keep the jampacked hall cool
It didn’t matter if the power was off for more than an hour
What mattered was they had come to watch their
Favourite artist, to inspire and be inspired.

“Artists crave for appreciation” is a statement long
flogged to death by writers, yet it contains
the essence of truth not recognized by many
and unreciprocated by a few.
This seasoned artist was of a different ilk
As he rose to speak there was again a
Thunderous applause
Greeting him, which was for the umpteenth time
It took ages before it died down

Finally, the audience had a chance to listen to 
The maestro.
“Dear ladies and gentlemen,” said he
You have loved and appreciated my work
For many decades
You have honoured me with great compliments and accolades
I am forever grateful for the love you’ve showered
On me”. He took a deep breath, tried to say something
But stopped, his breathing seemed laboured, his face
Wrought with anxiety.

At last, the words came out “With great sadness, I announce that
I shall be retiring today, I won’t be performing again.”
The audience was stunned into silence
Glad nobody has a pin to drop. I thought
Suddenly, the 6.2 feet tall figure that had graced the stage
For more than four decades came crashing down
Much bigger than a pin, the sound was even more
Deafening

People rushed to the stage but to no avail
The lifeless body lay there with sadness 
Reflecting on the face
The crowd swelled, displaying mixed emotions
Appreciation for the genius and sadness for losing him
He had left this world never to return, to ply his trade
He lived, strived, and craved for appreciation
Died for it, and because of it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 3/28/2024 10:01:00 AM
Nice poem. Great artists rarely look for appreciation. However appreciation is a great morale builder and we all love it. Thanks for sharing. Great win. btw who he was?
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MB Farookh
Date: 3/28/2024 11:30:00 AM
Jay, thank you for visiting my space and leaving a lovely comment. My poem is loosely based on ‘Shankarabharanam’, a Telugu film where the main lead character dies on the centre stage while performing. Though, the story is a little different, I used my creative imagination to make it a little more dramatic. I tried focusing more on the scene than on the person as it wasn’t a true story.. Blessings to you.
Date: 3/20/2024 3:24:00 AM
Awesome write beautifully orchestrated I totally enjoyed reading your fantastic work here.
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MB Farookh
Date: 3/20/2024 4:02:00 AM
Yolanda, thank you for your kind words and appreciation. Blessings to you!
Date: 3/18/2024 11:29:00 PM
What an amazing story! The music maestro performed for decades, making the audience glued to their seats despite discomforts in the jam packed halls. Men expressed their appreciation with thunderous applause as he sang. His end too was amid overwhelming applause. I must say he was indeed a very fortunate man. Beautiful narration dear Farookh
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MB Farookh
Date: 3/19/2024 4:01:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa, for your lovely comment. I'm thrilled when poets like you appreciate my work. Blessings to you!
Date: 3/18/2024 5:24:00 AM
Wow. He met his death in front of his appreciative fans.splendid story telling!
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MB Farookh
Date: 3/18/2024 8:08:00 AM
Thank you, AD, for the appreciation:) God bless!

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