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Applesauce Cake

Applesauce Cake Once again autumn’s jubilee of gold and umber leaves Drifts on a lazy Sunday morning rain Past kitchen windows Where scents of coffee and frying bacon Walk hand in hand Then race each other up the stairs To look for dreamers missed by the dawn While aunts and uncles, Cousins, sisters, brothers, Fathers, mothers Squeeze side by side into the breakfast nook, Touched by the shadow of Annette’s camellia tree Leaves tousled by the hand of autumn, To breakfast over fall chrysanthemums When Grammie clears her throat, Midst suspended coffee cups, Declaring: “This year I don’t think I’ll bake applesauce cake For Thanksgiving.” Gentle rains thunder in the silence Before stunned voices jump to life again Envisioning a holiday without Her crunchy pickles, New made jellies, Opened for the harvest festival, Completed by the allspiced cake Studded with plump summer raisins And toasted nuts; “All right.” she smiling says, Looking deep into her coffee cup, A gypsy searching for the future, “If you really want applesauce cake….” One voice resounds: “We really want applesauce cake!” Outside the passing wind Pats down the season’s Ruffled hair While serenity settles back Into her place at breakfast Once again.

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Date: 1/26/2020 8:30:00 AM
I love this, Sam. It reminds me of the times my siblings (all six) and I would sit around the table laughing and enjoying life with each other. I never heard of applesauce cake, but it sounds tasty. Nice write! Charlie
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/26/2020 1:23:00 PM
Hi Charlie, Thank you! This poems seems to have a life of its own especially bringing up warm family memories
Date: 1/9/2020 8:19:00 PM
so happy to hear this was inspired by you reading of MY childhood memories!!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/26/2020 1:26:00 PM
I think that's the way we work together; build together; inspire each other and build a community of poets! Thank you!
Date: 1/9/2020 1:47:00 PM
Sam, you are so great at describing everyday life in a poetic way that makes a reader eager to continue reading. I love reading poetry like this. Congratulations on your top win! Blessings for a great new year! xxoo
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/9/2020 6:15:00 PM
Aloha! Thank you for your support and encouragement for both this poem and Scented Leaves! So good to hear from you. I am truly humbled. Happy New Year.
Date: 1/8/2020 1:07:00 PM
Sam: You put into a wonderful piece what many of us with "good granny's" have lived. We all have that special item she dare not "forget". And many have her recipes. Thanks for sharing with all of us on the soup. oldbuck
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/12/2020 7:46:00 PM
Thank you for your message. I had hoped this poem would bring back memories for readers as it did for me!
Date: 1/8/2020 12:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win!;)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/9/2020 6:16:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 1/8/2020 9:40:00 AM
this one made me think of my niece when she was little i watched her and she wasn't big on many sweets but she loved applesauce cake so i made it weekly for her... good write... congrats on your win :)
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Date: 1/8/2020 1:05:00 AM
one coffe, one inspiration. I like that dream
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Date: 1/7/2020 11:12:00 PM
I like the way Grammie looked into her coffee cup for the future, and I also like the play between the weather outdoors and the brewing storm inside. Very nice, Sam. :)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/12/2020 7:51:00 PM
Thank you! Those stormy October Sunday mornigns are part of the fabric of my life. I wanted to honor them and to recognize how life inside was reflection of what was happening outside.
Date: 1/7/2020 7:05:00 PM
lovely picture you've painted. the description is wonderful
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/7/2020 7:08:00 PM
Hi Eve, Thank you, as always, for your message. I can still see and feel and taste those October Sunday mornings. I am so glad it came through in the poem!
Date: 1/7/2020 3:59:00 PM
this was a really cute telling of this story about Grandma and her startling announcement. very charming.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/7/2020 7:06:00 PM
Hi Andrea! Thank you for your message. I decided to enter it in one of the contests after reading 2 of your poems about childhood memories. I still bake her cake and so does one of my sons. This was almost a family ritual.

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