Apples and Cinnamon

~ Flour on her hands, and centuries on her elbow Fingers balance a 'hand-me-down' dish, Roosting deftly on finger-tips, high in mid-air Lovingly she spins it, magician's hands twirling Trimming the edges with flourish and flair A bit like Da Vinci' ,…a small tool in hand Skillfully carving, as a blade skims the rim Pieces of pie dough, will soon drop away She is shearing the excess, and trimming the dough That turn into ribbons…wouldn't you know? You must use every scrap,…meaning just that!.. Waste not, want not…each morsel a prize Rolling them flat to large walnut size ~ Spread thick the butter…nothing is better A sprinkle goes here, a sprinkle goes there Cinnamon sugar, please don’t be spare Baking till golden, toasting next to the pie A preview of magic, a taste of delight How does she know it, ... this magic voodoo? Lessons in chemistry, from so long ago She had watched this drama unfold in her dreams Unfolding and playing on her memory's screen This silent black magic, will play once again Although the old soundtrack, worn of it's skill The warmth of old memories, will never be stilled… Don't bother to ask, for recipe pages It is magic at best....., so priceless the task So sprinkled with love, and has passed through the ages

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/9/2014 8:43:00 AM
Nicely done poem, congrats on the win,
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Date: 12/8/2014 11:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely crafted poem Carrie.
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Date: 12/8/2014 2:04:00 PM
Now this is one I like! Not just a list of pies, but an experience! Deserved higher placement, I think.
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Date: 12/8/2014 12:38:00 PM
Perfectly baked! Congratulations.
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Date: 12/8/2014 11:30:00 AM
such wonderful memories - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 12/8/2014 10:39:00 AM
Carrie, awesome involvement in this poem, you pull me into a wonderful experience of pie making. Thanks for entering the pie contest, truly wonderful submissions sent in, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 6/11/2011 6:20:00 PM
I knew you'd win with this!! You go gal just a precious memory as I said, as good on the second read as the first. Light & Love
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Date: 6/9/2011 3:45:00 PM
How lovely Caroline. These are heirloom memories even though the pinwheels are gone. My favorite quick treat was my Mom' doughnut holes. Congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/8/2011 11:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Anything Homemade"contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/7/2011 7:52:00 PM
wow, This is one of my favorites. Just because it makes me want to EAT it, not to mention, it is crafted by the fine craftsmanship of a true poet! Congratulatiosn, CArrie.
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Date: 6/6/2011 12:57:00 PM
A beautifully crafted work. Congrats Carrie on your very well deserved win in nette's contest. much loved this exceptional flair of yours..love, gautami .
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Date: 6/6/2011 12:23:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one..One that honors maybe your mother or grandmother but really all women..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 6/6/2011 8:44:00 AM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of nette, Carrie
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Date: 6/6/2011 8:43:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your wonderful win in Nette's contest with this fantastic creation ..enjoy luv..
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Date: 6/6/2011 6:57:00 AM
You made me hungry with this poem so I guess you captured it just right. Congrats on the win. Mike
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Date: 5/31/2011 4:59:00 PM
such a wonderful memory! I wish my Mom had taught me how to make pies, she never did, hers were so good! Light & Love
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Date: 5/31/2011 4:57:00 PM
sounds real yummy, love this write, very creative piece of work.
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Date: 5/31/2011 1:49:00 PM
oh mmm good-- shucks Carrie this is one heartwarming and delicious, cozy write-- you got me wishing that I was making some cinnamon rolls right now! Really enjoyed how you included the "heart" in baking this is just mmmmm :)
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Date: 5/31/2011 10:49:00 AM
Thank you for posting your wonderful poetry Carrie. It was a pleasure to read. I am hoping you have a wonderful day full of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2011 7:47:00 AM
Hello dear poet ! I came to your lil' corner of the world here to tell you that I revised my last write...ya might like it more. Any who, what a brilliant write here Carrie ! See, you are one of those poets who I can roll with..hey, roll with, as in, your pin-wheels ! *smiles* Great write girlie ! Have a blessed week...much love, james
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Date: 5/31/2011 3:16:00 AM
nluv*Skatow this is truely brilliant carrie its superb
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Date: 5/30/2011 9:37:00 PM
can you give me some oxygen, please... i'm breathless, carrie! what a creative shift! :) huggs , nette
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Date: 5/30/2011 7:52:00 PM
Very creative write Carrie.Enjoyed.Thanks for your inspiring words at my page.
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Date: 5/30/2011 7:07:00 PM
this is so nice.. I have enjoyed your write tonight. cory
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