Apples

  At just one in a day
  Apples keep 'doc' away
  Appetizing delight
  As the taste is just right
  Allow yourself a bite
   A whole lot to choose from
  And apple pies, yum yum

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Jack Horne

Date: 7/18/2025 7:25:00 AM

love this - must try this form!

Joe Maverick

Date: 6/4/2025 7:00:00 AM

A consolation in September.' To taste and the summer to remember Joseph.' Coated with toffe or choclate.? Spiced? Or with bread and cheese.? Should you please.? A write with bite That csused some delight.' (Good-night)

Valsa George

Date: 6/4/2025 5:28:00 AM

Beautifully written Pleiades. I like crunchy green apples. Have a great week ahead, dear friend.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 5/29/2025 10:12:00 AM

I agree with you Apple is the king of fruits. But I didn’t like the taste. My favourite fruit is Mango, a typical Indian fruit. Have Great Days.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/11/2025 1:21:00 AM

Your Apple-Pleiades is such a delightful offering, Joseph. I love apples, but when I was offered a crab apple (had never seen one!) I sort of lost my appetite!:) ~ Regards // paul

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/1/2025 3:01:00 PM

Great poem Joseph. I like apples , different kinds. Apples with cheese too and apple crisp. Fun poem :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2025 5:33:00 PM

My husband would have given this first place. He just loves apple pies. Well done and congrats on my winner list

Joseph May
Date: 4/29/2025 10:13:00 AM

Thank you for my placement Andrea

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/28/2025 1:58:00 PM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I loved reading your fun "Apple" write again. Warm "Apple" Pie With Ice Cream Is For Me... Hooray!!! Have a blessed day with your win..........

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/22/2025 2:12:00 PM

Such a tasty treat indeed. Vanilla ice cream is sooooo yummy with apple pie. :) Now I'm craving some of that deliciousness. My best to you, Joseph. :) Hugs, Brandy

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/21/2025 9:33:00 AM

Great. I love apple pies.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/18/2025 2:41:00 PM

I love apples and I love your "Apple" fun write. Great Ending.... Pie... Hooray!!! "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful spring day and Blessed Easter.........