Apple Picking

white fence green backyard granny smith's falling like stars apple picking hearts

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 10/5/2023 11:23:00 AM

Very nicely penned. From fence to apples + stars, much covered in 3 lines. Best wishes, Brian

Karen Jones
Date: 10/5/2023 11:56:00 AM

Thanks Brian!

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/5/2023 6:20:00 AM

This is nice! I just bought a bag of apples at a farm stand :)

Karen Jones
Date: 10/5/2023 7:36:00 AM

Cool. Thanks Heidi. Hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/4/2023 9:46:00 AM

your Haiku was beautiful...reminded me of the apples growing in my grandmother's back yard...'falling like stars' described them in the fall. Well done, Karen.

Karen Jones
Date: 10/4/2023 10:02:00 AM

Aw thanks Sara.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/4/2023 8:07:00 AM

Delicate imagery.

Karen Jones
Date: 10/4/2023 10:10:00 AM

Thanks Richard!

James Peranteau

Date: 10/3/2023 11:53:00 PM

I happen to have the apple tree, likewise the quince fruit tree, line 2...it's alwayz raining fruitas here...sticking to the standard 'haiku' i see ;)...much love

Karen Jones
Date: 10/4/2023 7:05:00 AM

I am sure you love that tree. Granny Smith's are my favorite. I am new to haiku form so still learning. Hugs

Karen Croft

Date: 10/3/2023 9:48:00 PM

Lovely thought on apple picking. Thank for your comment!

Karen Jones
Date: 10/4/2023 7:03:00 AM

My pleasure and thanks also.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/3/2023 8:50:00 PM

Great imagery in the picture-perfect Haiku. if for contest good luck. Hugs and blessings

Karen Jones
Date: 10/3/2023 8:58:00 PM

Hi Eve. I am new to Haikus and was horrified to learn I was making capitalization errors! Lol. Thanks for contest luck. At first it was written for fun though. But then I figured why not enter. Hugs and blessings returned.