Apple Pickin' Time

In the fall we used to go to the old Johnson place
To pick apples from the aging trees out back
They patiently stood with lichen covered grace
A once grand old house now off the beaten track

Boxes and buckets and bags we'd carry along
Who could forget Mom's big picnic lunch
Picking was fun and Dad sang an old song
We were always a boisterous and happy bunch

When picking was done and we'd eaten our fill
We'd dangle our feet in the sweet little stream
Then  tired ,all headed for home, excited still
Thinking of pies, sauce, and apples with cream...

In the fall we used to go to the old Johnson place
To pick apples from the aging trees out back
They patiently stood with lichen covered grace
A once grand old house now off the beaten track
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 5:49 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go ..Sara
A  Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 5:26 PM
Barbra, Awesome Apple Pickin' Time Win................ SKAT ~ LOVE ~
Anglesey Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 11:59 AM
Very enjoyable verses and visuals. Made me feel like I was right there in the scene. Congrats on your win :)
Johnson Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 11:25 AM
This is very good Barbara. You would probably have gotten first but there should have been another verse. My favorite of all. Love, Joyce
Mehta Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 4:04 AM
Congrats on the win , Barbara
Dietrich Avatar
October 7, 2013 at 6:40 PM
Nicely done, barbara. Good memories of apple pickin' days.
Ekechukwu Avatar
October 6, 2013 at 4:47 PM
Well penned my dear,love your grand style. Haven't seen you comment on people's works,are u still with us? Am really concerned,will be delighted if you kindly rePly by commenting on one of my poems. Wishing you the best. Love and hugs, Always Baron Of Ebullion.
Mehta Avatar
October 5, 2013 at 9:42 AM
beautiful rhyming, happy ton read it aloud, barbara
Brown Avatar
October 4, 2013 at 8:01 PM
what a wonderful memory, nothing quite like apples fresh off the tree! great job!
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