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Apple Pickin' Time

In the fall we used to go to the old Johnson place To pick apples from the aging trees out back They patiently stood with lichen covered grace A once grand old house now off the beaten track Boxes and buckets and bags we'd carry along Who could forget Mom's big picnic lunch Picking was fun and Dad sang an old song We were always a boisterous and happy bunch When picking was done and we'd eaten our fill We'd dangle our feet in the sweet little stream Then tired ,all headed for home, excited still Thinking of pies, sauce, and apples with cream... In the fall we used to go to the old Johnson place To pick apples from the aging trees out back They patiently stood with lichen covered grace A once grand old house now off the beaten track

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Date: 11/12/2013 5:49:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go ..Sara
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Date: 11/9/2013 5:26:00 PM
Barbra, Awesome Apple Pickin' Time Win................ SKAT ~ LOVE ~
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Date: 11/9/2013 11:59:00 AM
Very enjoyable verses and visuals. Made me feel like I was right there in the scene. Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 11/9/2013 11:25:00 AM
This is very good Barbara. You would probably have gotten first but there should have been another verse. My favorite of all. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/9/2013 4:04:00 AM
Congrats on the win , Barbara
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Date: 10/7/2013 6:40:00 PM
Nicely done, barbara. Good memories of apple pickin' days.
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Date: 10/6/2013 4:47:00 PM
Well penned my dear,love your grand style. Haven't seen you comment on people's works,are u still with us? Am really concerned,will be delighted if you kindly rePly by commenting on one of my poems. Wishing you the best. Love and hugs, Always Baron Of Ebullion.
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Date: 10/5/2013 9:42:00 AM
beautiful rhyming, happy ton read it aloud, barbara
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Date: 10/4/2013 8:01:00 PM
what a wonderful memory, nothing quite like apples fresh off the tree! great job!
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