Apple Harvest

the boughs are laden swift hands gather fruits of fall deer come at twilight

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Harry Horsman

Date: 10/4/2010 7:34:00 AM

Brings back a lot of memories Barbara. enjoyed this Haiku. Harry

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/3/2010 6:08:00 PM

sounds like my dad's garden!

James Fraser

Date: 10/3/2010 2:45:00 PM

Book me a flight, what a lovely sight this would be to see. Cute Haiku Barbara >> James

David Smalling

Date: 10/1/2010 5:32:00 AM

The second stanza is such a poignant allusion to many things ... the others swell with meanings from it. I love it, this is imagination at its ablest.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/30/2010 11:02:00 AM

What an outstanding way to enjoy a day. I am so happy to be able to read the excellent poetry here at PoetrySoup today. Hope you are enjoying your day and finding much inspiration along the way Barbara. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/30/2010 6:01:00 AM

Great write with Nice observation of a deer's activities, Good luck in the contest, Barbara

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/30/2010 12:30:00 AM

barbara this is wonderful, Harry

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/29/2010 11:35:00 PM

love it, if its for the animal/fall haiku contest I wish you well with this little gem