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Orchard tree, spotted outside our bedroom window - round and green ornaments, thrown to the ground, delicious, in my apple-knocker* pie. lifted off Autumnal floor, sliced with lemon, cinnamon, and a beginner’s grin. never gave thought to the old couple - the tree’s provision, the hammer and nail pounding the contoured foam in a wood frame, for changing baby, onto the dresser that would become ours. that pie and the neighbor’s salmon (my first taste) - we were like pioneers in Fortuna. Another neighbor on this block of rentals, a young couple who watched our daughter for a millisecond, offered up brownies - i’d not take a bite of the apple, metaphorically speaking, as Eden did enough damage - this sailor would resist the weeds, drawn instead to the aromatic waft coming from the oven and the nestle of a powdered infant. like the flawed granny apples, our family life begins by savoring what life brings - it’s imperfections in others, in us…our own sins find us. true, we found the sky above us, also - our knees on holy ground, through the formidable years. 7/2/2022 A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE *rustic

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Date: 7/11/2022 10:20:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS Kim The concluding lines are Great. I appreciate. Love.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/12/2022 6:35:00 PM
Thank you, Anisha!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/12/2022 6:22:00 PM
Thank you, Anisha!
Date: 7/11/2022 9:14:00 PM
This made me smile "we were like pioneers in Fortuna. " and I do not even know what Fortuna is yet.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/12/2022 6:19:00 PM
Fortuna was the city we lived in. :)
Date: 7/5/2022 5:06:00 PM
Your poem has such a warm, homey feel to it. I love it! "and the nestle of a powdered infant" - nothing smells so sweet. Congrats on your win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2022 6:31:00 PM
Thank you, Ann!
Date: 7/4/2022 5:01:00 AM
"our family life begins by savoring what life brings" - Great realistic thought. Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/4/2022 5:47:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj!
Date: 7/3/2022 10:50:00 AM
Awesome, Kim. CONGRATS on your podium win. Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/3/2022 2:48:00 PM
Thank you, Janice!
Date: 7/3/2022 9:45:00 AM
I ate many an apple pie on visits to USA but didn't particularly like the addition of cinnamon too much - it overpowered the taste of apple too much for my liking. My wife on the other hand loved the taste. Anyway..I digress. :) you've cooked up a great recipe for a poem here Kim. Cheers - Gary
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/3/2022 2:49:00 PM
Thanks, Gary! I, myself, am partial to cherry pie…mmm
Date: 7/3/2022 6:28:00 AM
Can't beat apple pie. Those Granny Smith apples are quite tart. I enjoyed reading your winner today. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/3/2022 2:49:00 PM
Thank you, Sara! :)
Date: 7/2/2022 11:20:00 AM
My favorite dessert: apple pie with ice cream.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2022 11:37:00 AM
Delectable! My mom’s too!
Date: 7/2/2022 10:16:00 AM
I see you wrote rustic at the bottom. yes, rustic indeed. It has a great sentimental feel to it. My hubbie loves apple pies. Me, not so much!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2022 10:22:00 AM
My favorite is cherry! But how cool that we had a tree growing in our yard. Later, in Hawaii, we had a papaya tree. Thank you, Andrea! :)

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