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Appetites In Eating Or Sleeping

APPETITES  IN   EATING  OR  SLEEPING


My rabbit at home is  called Bubble

Her appetites  cause  her  some trouble  

At night with her   buck          

She  loves  a good . . . . . . . duck  

In one month her food  bill  can  double

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Carol Sunshine Brown

February 23, 2011 at 6:09 AM

Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Limerick II". A well deserved win Sydney. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

February 8, 2011 at 6:26 AM

Congratulations on the welldeserved win in the contest, Sydney

Nette Onclaud

February 8, 2011 at 6:02 AM

hi sydney!! a real steal!! best cheers for your high win! :) huggs, nette

Elaine George

February 8, 2011 at 1:06 AM

Halarious!!! Sydney. Many congrats on your BIG WIN. Lainie

Andrea Dietrich

February 7, 2011 at 9:28 PM

haha, this was really cute, Sydney. Congratulations to you. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 7, 2011 at 8:08 PM

Congrats Syd on your winning poem in Debbie's contest with this creative write luv.. enjoy another top ten sweet success with luv..

Kory Calhoun

February 7, 2011 at 7:31 PM

Hey Sydney - Congrats on your WIN in Deborah's contest. Best wishes, KC

Robert A. Dufresne

February 7, 2011 at 6:45 PM

congratulations Sydney!

Joyce Johnson

February 7, 2011 at 5:57 PM

Great limerick. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Robert Pettit

February 7, 2011 at 5:34 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest.

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 31, 2011 at 1:59 PM

full of wit and humor on the two appetites depending on each other, Sydney

Nette Onclaud

January 31, 2011 at 12:26 PM

oooh, syd... one appetizing limerick, soo smooth and clever! now, it's my time to STEAL this and lock it in my file..lol!! go for the win, word weaver! :) huggs, nette

Carolyn Devonshire

January 31, 2011 at 11:35 AM

Super funny, Syd. Those rabbits multiply quickly. If she continues having intimate meetings with her buck, her food bill will expand so fast she'll be trying to duck buck when he comes to call. Great laugh from this poem, my friend. Thanks for your kind words. I write from my heart and when it is sad, the emotions are reflected in the poems. That's why I hold so many "humor" contests -- need to break out of the troubles and smile more. Love, Carolyn