Valsa George Poet Pleiades

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Apollo

Apollo, Grecian god
Acclaimed as god of sun
Ageless and immortal
Adept in many skills
Archer and musician
Athletic and handsome
Adorable in mien

Placed Second 
March.2. 2022
Greek Mythology Poetry Contest
Sponsor - Joseph May
Syllable Counter used- How Many Syllables

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Eve Roper March 10, 2022 at 3:10 PM Great Pleiades and information on Apollo , Valsa, congratulations on your win. Blessings to you

Sam Kauffman March 9, 2022 at 9:21 AM Valsa, congratulations on your win. This is poetic, lyrical and tells the story of Apollo. So nicely done. Blessings.

John Watt March 8, 2022 at 11:05 PM Excellent, Valsa ~ congratulations for your win!

Michelle Faulkner March 8, 2022 at 6:50 PM Back to wish you congratulations on your win, well done~

Christuraj Alex March 8, 2022 at 6:42 PM Vivid depiction of Apollo, the mythical god of poetry. Congratulations!

Joseph May March 8, 2022 at 3:39 PM Congrats on your win Valsa, Very nicely penned

John Watt March 7, 2022 at 8:25 PM A very nice encapsulation of one of the biggest names in mythology in a challenging poetic format. Well done, Valsa, and best wishes in the Pleiades contest.

Michelle Faulkner March 5, 2022 at 8:54 AM Very impressive depiction of Apollo, sounds like he had quite a lot of talents!

Caren Krutsinger March 3, 2022 at 11:06 AM Not easy to do and yet you have created an admirable awesome all-powerful poem.

Gershon Wolf March 2, 2022 at 3:08 PM Wow. You gave Apollo 7 A's! I guess he graduates 'summa cum laude!' ~ Prudent Student

Rico Leffanta March 2, 2022 at 10:22 AM I see the Greek god is much more attractive to women than the Christian god, who appears more like Old Father Time, but then women are more impressed by wealth than appearances . . . .

Joseph P. DiMino March 2, 2022 at 7:07 AM Ah, to be young again. Oh well, maybe I never did look quite like that:) Not nearly! Lol. Nicely said, Valsa. Best of luck with contest. Joe.

Vijay Pandit March 2, 2022 at 5:36 AM Apollo graces your poem, Valsa. Well done in this hard to execute form.

Victor Buhagiar March 2, 2022 at 5:06 AM Lovely pleidades, Valsa. I have not forgotten you.

JC Brul March 2, 2022 at 3:28 AM Very well-written. Best for the win!!

Tom Cunningham March 2, 2022 at 1:44 AM Perfect entry for the contest Valsa. Hope your week is going well. Tom