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Aphrodite (Fantasy)

The goddess of love, beauty and sexual rapture, Born out of the churning and foaming of Severed genitals thrown into the ocean Her beauty irresistible, joyous and glamorous Was a concern of worry to her father Zeus, Who married her off to sooty Hephaestus. She loved and was loved by gods and mortals. Adonis being the most famous of all. With her charms Aphrodite still lives on, Father Zeus no more worried about her. Gods have retired from the earth as they Are no longer interested in earthly beauty. Adonis is available for the asking, Sex - still the only method of worship.

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Grace Eunsong Lee

Date: 7/3/2010 6:40:00 AM

Wow...I learned a lot just reading this poem. Great approach! Thanks for commenting on so many of my poems :) -Grace

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/1/2010 7:26:00 PM

Yet another edit! I have been tied up all day writing a magazine article on the oil spill. Sorry I found your email so late. Wrote a nine-page article today and conducted seven more interviews for it.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/1/2010 7:22:00 PM

Good grief, another edit just made. I missed this entirely. Sorry!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/1/2010 7:19:00 PM

Soup mail and further editing made. Love, cd

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/1/2010 7:04:00 PM

Whew! Just read your blog and had to rewrite my villanelle. Thanks for pointing out the rhyme scheme. I hadn't noticed it before. Love, Carolyn

John Loving Iii

Date: 7/1/2010 1:59:00 PM

was'nt she the one that got caught in the web with apolo on top of her? what kind of beauty is that? john

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/1/2010 1:49:00 PM

You certainly do write well about mythology, Dr. Ram. Great write and the last two lines are outstanding! Love, Carolyn

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 7/1/2010 11:38:00 AM

This is certainly a wonderful descriptive poem about the Greek goddess of love and lust. I like the informative flow of the words and the essence of the message. Best wishes with the contest. Blessings, Joseph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/1/2010 8:04:00 AM

How informative.. I did not know that about Aphrodite and the severed genitals.. how sad with such beauty and luv to offer.. and the rest of the Gods u describe in your poem are absolutely wonderful and of course your last line..need I say more? the "Sweetheart" enjoyed this brilliant write from Hawaii.. aloha.. good luck in your judging today..

June Fone

Date: 7/1/2010 5:38:00 AM

I am loving the imagery of this piece Dr Ram.

Sarah Hales

Date: 7/1/2010 5:37:00 AM

This is wonderfull love it sarah x

Juan Paolo Galua

Date: 7/1/2010 5:01:00 AM

wow...i have the poem of the same title...and i like your mastery about this goddess because she is also my favorite goddess...great write!

Anthony Nutter

Date: 7/1/2010 4:55:00 AM

Sex - still the only method of worship. Not sure about worship but it has been the downfall of many marriages, and cultures. Enjoyed this mythical write, well done.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/1/2010 4:30:00 AM

Not sure about the last line or the way in which you wanted interpertation of that line..Keep the creative pen flowing,.Sara