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Anywhere But Here

Somber slate clouds blanket the longing skies, whilst wisps of snow paint the frozen ground below. Ombre leaves barrenly speckle slumbering trees, glistening sheets of ice coat their fading existence. Another bitter winter blows in, like thistle tangling around forsaken irises. Threads of changing seasons cling to my coat. Taking a deep breath, I exhale, watching it hang in the evening air. “Anywhere but here” rings in my head. Empty coldness soaks into my soul, as an icy blue-white depression takes hold. Loneliness rests upon abandoned courtyards; decaying rose petals become fossils between layers of winter’s aquamarine verglas, bathed by the snowglow of another illuminated midnight. Death’s cold fingers trace my spine, submerging me further into the gelid grip of despair, massacring any hope of escape from this torment.

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Date: 2/2/2025 8:21:00 PM
Your breathtaking imagery blew me away with such a delightful poetry buzz. I have not stumbled upon you before (that I remember) and I'm glad my mouse clicking brought me here. I'm sure I'll visit again. CayCay
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Sara Jama
Date: 2/3/2025 5:03:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 12/12/2024 2:56:00 AM
"Somber slate clouds", "icy blue-white depression" - Beautiful poem. Congratulations!
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Sara Jama
Date: 2/3/2025 5:03:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 12/11/2024 6:19:00 PM
Sara, heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest. This is so beautifully composed, especially the last stanza. You're definitely a poet to watch out for!
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Sara Jama
Date: 2/3/2025 5:03:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 12/5/2024 11:57:00 AM
I love the way youv painted imagery throughout this grumpy! Your artistic mind can be seen throughout this very descriptive and poignant poem, flowing in such s seamless manner! I love the winter wordplay and also the ending which depicts such deeply moving emotions within! How one feels stuck in a place where they wish to no longer be, can be felt! Pleasure reading this! Best wishes
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Sara Jama
Date: 2/3/2025 5:04:00 AM
Thank you Ink.

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