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As I claim my own parcel of solitude from yesterday's banging boom, I see heaven expanding through you in me: fireflies glow rare as Sunday’s bliss, never mind if there is a call for patience when holy hours rise upon the lines of your mouth; resting on the ledge of a private oasis. This I cannot enter... the night curfew drifts gently and quietly yet full of love's spaces; O the hush of your mouth tender as harp's rhythm I want to kiss. My parcel of quietude becomes yours while we listen to the same monastic silence, gazing at clouds alone and together until we rest lovingly inside our gentle, holy world. Into near midnight with eyes closed, we slumber and then... John Hamilton's Your Best Free Verse Love Poem--2 2/19/2017

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Date: 2/25/2017 12:22:00 AM
Thoughtfully and creatively penned ... congrats, my friend! :)
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Date: 2/24/2017 8:59:00 PM
Pondering images! Congrats, Nette!
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Date: 2/24/2017 8:40:00 PM
Wonderful write Nette, congratulations on a fine placement!
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Date: 1/11/2017 9:51:00 AM
Just lovely, exquisite writing Nette, you are in a class by yourself. A7
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Date: 1/5/2017 10:30:00 AM
Beautifully written Nette and a joy to read. Great job.
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Date: 12/29/2016 10:55:00 AM
Very Beautifully written Nette, Sunday the day of rest for many, a time to relax and have a stroll in the park, but anything goes!!! enjoyed Best Wishes Kevin
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Date: 12/29/2016 8:26:00 AM
Love this one, Nette:)
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Date: 12/29/2016 7:21:00 AM
- Beautiful and delicious feeling, Nette - Luck in the contest - Thanks for the year 2016 ... looking forward to a new year with new poems and friendship :) - Best wishes for a happy new year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/28/2016 9:08:00 PM
I have had some supremely fine wines in my life, a very few. Okay, you see where I'm going with this comparison. ; )
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Date: 12/28/2016 9:00:00 PM
Nette:It has a beautiful Sunday feel, a single solitude made from two. Nice visuals and a flowing read. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 12/28/2016 3:54:00 PM
A beautiful musicality and calm power that carry the reader along with this Sunday verse. Your talent as a poet is outstanding!
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Date: 12/28/2016 3:47:00 PM
oh.. my friend what a tender and peaceful poem you have to fav
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Date: 12/28/2016 3:44:00 PM
Very nice Nette! I enjoyed this :)
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Date: 12/28/2016 3:29:00 PM
I love the phrase "my own parcel of solitude". Lovely poem, Nette. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/28/2016 3:20:00 PM
A soft and soothing poetic offering bringing me to a quiet day with someone special to just lay back and dream with and then... Your poetry is always amazing Nette, such beauty flows from your pen.
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