Premiere Contest WinnerAnticipation

Ooh, how he loved
sliding his hands
over the long silkiness,
the youthful curves
of his new wife,
over the negligee
before it rode up…
anticipation like driving a new car -
not comparable,
I know,
and at odds,
depending on
whether you are for the wife
or the car.
Ooh, how he loved sliding his hands
over the hood,
the caps,
the hips,
the back.
He loved the mirrors -
those on
the side or over the bed.
He handled his new ride with care,
the caress with smiles to impress.
The leather new, the scent
of Mon Paris Eau de Parfum.
He’s not a poet, notices not
the moon, sun or stars,
but he can feel his way
in the dark.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Gilmour Avatar
July 10, 2023 at 10:17 PM
Many congratulations dear Kim, I loved your words, so cleverly written and deserving your first place win - well done. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Rodrigues Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 4:26 AM
Thank you, Ann!
Cassell Avatar
July 10, 2023 at 2:17 PM
Congratulations on first place. I could feel the car as you spoke.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 10, 2023 at 3:14 PM
Thanks, sweet poet!
Kauffman Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 10:48 AM
Romantic and funny all at the same time, Kim! Very tastefully written! Congratulations on your first place win! Blessings.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 4:01 PM
And you made me smile seeing both! Thanks, Sam!
Hind Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 2:35 PM
Hey, congratulations on your win! I liked this!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 7:19 PM
So glad you liked this, Paige!
Delaney Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 5:12 AM
This is wonderful, Kim: Congratulations on your top placement. SuZ
Rodrigues Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 6:06 AM
Thank you, SuZ
Brul Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 2:25 AM
a unique and creative way to write on "first night". Delightful and exquisitely sensual. Congratulations on your trophy win, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 6:07 AM
Fhank you, JCB!
Seeker Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 9:14 PM
Seductive in every detail, enjoyed every word, so eloquently nuanced ~ warmest congratulations on your trophy win, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 6:08 AM
Thank you Unseeking Seeker!
Dutta Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 8:51 PM
Big Congrats to win TOP Hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 6:08 AM
Thank you, Anisha! Hugs :)
Evans Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 5:17 PM
Congratulations Kim. Great poem. All the best...............peace!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 5:39 PM
Thank you, Ricky! :)
Rose  Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 3:03 PM
this is very creative, enjoyed reading it congrats
Rodrigues Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 3:10 PM
Thank you, sweet Rose!
Poet Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 2:51 PM
What a splendid juxtaposition and extraordinary encounter! Utterly enchanting and resplendent. Your poetic prowess never ceases to amaze. Heartiest congratulations on your triumphant contest win, dear, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 3:10 PM
I can never adequately say how much I appreciate you, Lasaad! :)
Buhagiar Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 10:58 PM
So romantic and dazzling. Always fabulous poems from you. dear Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 5:31 AM
I appreciate you so, my friend! Thank you!
George Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 9:42 PM
Beautiful comparison and experience ! Very romantic. Though he is not a poet and does not particularly watch the moon and stars, 'he can feel his way in the dark'. Great poem, dear Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 5:32 AM
Thank you, Valsa! :)
Wolf Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 7:31 PM
Ha, ha, ha, ha! I hope his new wife is named 'Carmen.' Then this fellow can double his pleasure. Interesting angle here, Kim. :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 8:10 PM
LOL! :) Happy 4th!
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