Anticipation Premiere Contest Winner

Ooh, how he loved
sliding his hands
over the long silkiness,
the youthful curves
of his new wife,
over the negligee
before it rode up…
anticipation like driving a new car -
not comparable,
I know,
and at odds,
depending on
whether you are for the wife
or the car.
Ooh, how he loved sliding his hands
over the hood,
the caps,
the hips,
the back.
He loved the mirrors -
those on
the side or over the bed.
He handled his new ride with care,
the caress with smiles to impress.
The leather new, the scent
of Mon Paris Eau de Parfum.
He’s not a poet, notices not
the moon, sun or stars,
but he can feel his way
in the dark.

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Date: 7/10/2023 10:17:00 PM
Many congratulations dear Kim, I loved your words, so cleverly written and deserving your first place win - well done. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2023 4:26:00 AM
Thank you, Ann!
Date: 7/10/2023 2:17:00 PM
Congratulations on first place. I could feel the car as you spoke.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/10/2023 3:14:00 PM
Thanks, sweet poet!
Date: 7/7/2023 10:48:00 AM
Romantic and funny all at the same time, Kim! Very tastefully written! Congratulations on your first place win! Blessings.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/7/2023 4:01:00 PM
And you made me smile seeing both! Thanks, Sam!
Date: 7/6/2023 2:35:00 PM
Hey, congratulations on your win! I liked this!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/6/2023 7:19:00 PM
So glad you liked this, Paige!
Date: 7/6/2023 5:12:00 AM
This is wonderful, Kim: Congratulations on your top placement. SuZ
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/6/2023 6:06:00 AM
Thank you, SuZ
Date: 7/6/2023 2:25:00 AM
a unique and creative way to write on "first night". Delightful and exquisitely sensual. Congratulations on your trophy win, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/6/2023 6:07:00 AM
Fhank you, JCB!
Date: 7/5/2023 9:14:00 PM
Seductive in every detail, enjoyed every word, so eloquently nuanced ~ warmest congratulations on your trophy win, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/6/2023 6:08:00 AM
Thank you Unseeking Seeker!
Date: 7/5/2023 8:51:00 PM
Big Congrats to win TOP Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/6/2023 6:08:00 AM
Thank you, Anisha! Hugs :)
Date: 7/5/2023 5:17:00 PM
Congratulations Kim. Great poem. All the best...............peace!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2023 5:39:00 PM
Thank you, Ricky! :)
Date: 7/5/2023 3:03:00 PM
this is very creative, enjoyed reading it congrats
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2023 3:10:00 PM
Thank you, sweet Rose!
Date: 7/5/2023 2:51:00 PM
What a splendid juxtaposition and extraordinary encounter! Utterly enchanting and resplendent. Your poetic prowess never ceases to amaze. Heartiest congratulations on your triumphant contest win, dear, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2023 3:10:00 PM
I can never adequately say how much I appreciate you, Lasaad! :)
Date: 7/4/2023 10:58:00 PM
So romantic and dazzling. Always fabulous poems from you. dear Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2023 5:31:00 AM
I appreciate you so, my friend! Thank you!
Date: 7/4/2023 9:42:00 PM
Beautiful comparison and experience ! Very romantic. Though he is not a poet and does not particularly watch the moon and stars, 'he can feel his way in the dark'. Great poem, dear Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2023 5:32:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa! :)
Date: 7/4/2023 7:31:00 PM
Ha, ha, ha, ha! I hope his new wife is named 'Carmen.' Then this fellow can double his pleasure. Interesting angle here, Kim. :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/4/2023 8:10:00 PM
LOL! :) Happy 4th!
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