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Anticipation

ANTICIPATION Gorgeous, handsome, intriguing, jazzy, knockout lad just sitting alone, sipping his glass of shaken martini. Disinterested, deep in thoughts with muted sighs. Suddenly, something caught his expressive eyes. Attractive, beguiling, charming dame, enticing, foxy heading to the table across his, her eyes meeting his. Her simple gaze with slight smile captured his attention. Ahhh, a night of two strangers making a connection. Lovely, mystifying night of pizazz, questions, rapport. Getting to know and feeling each other to connect. Exchanging glances, smiles, praises, words of love. A fascination leading to anticipation of what is next. 8/12/21 Submitted A Brian Strand you choose Poetry Brian Strand 7/28/21 Alpha Lines Poetry Joseph May Used: RhymeZone (sighs/eyes; attention/connection; connect/next)

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Harry Horsman

Date: 7/31/2021 8:10:00 AM

Wonderful poetry, and intriguing, with the anticipation, although my conclusion is poetic license.

Marilene Evans
Date: 7/31/2021 9:10:00 AM

Thanks, Harry. I'm granting the poetic license. LOL. Have a great week-end.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/29/2021 1:28:00 AM

A great poem, Marilene, you chose some tough letters, but make it look so easy, good job:)

Marilene Evans
Date: 7/29/2021 9:24:00 AM

Thanks so much, Jo. Have a great day.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/28/2021 11:05:00 PM

Knowing how difficult the type of poem is, you did very well especially with some difficult letters, Well done.

Marilene Evans
Date: 7/29/2021 9:24:00 AM

Thank you, Victor. Just like when I worked on some of my tough cases when I was working. I was just up for the challenge yesterday, not today! LOL.

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/28/2021 6:33:00 PM

WoW! Marilene, You did a great job with your Alpha lines. It makes sense, and it has a nice rhythm and flow. I could just picture the whole scene. You made it look easy. I, for one, am having a hard time coming up with something. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis

Marilene Evans
Date: 7/28/2021 8:24:00 PM

Just kind of got at it, after many tries. Started picturing myself meeting a good looking dude! LOL.... Have a good night.