Ant Hill

Ant hill swarms with ants.
Rain is on the horizon. 
Ants soon disappear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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George Avatar
November 17, 2024 at 8:23 PM
Ant hills are the work of millions of ants. They are set up mainly during summer. When rain comes, ants generally disappear. Great haiku, Hilda.
Greenhough Avatar
December 1, 2024 at 1:26 AM
Thank you. A few ants can bite quite hard.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 9:42 AM
Into all the gobbledygook! Still raining here…raining and raining…the sun will come out tomorrow…or so the song goes ;) Enjoyed!
Greenhough Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 11:52 PM
Thank you.
Baker Avatar
January 23, 2024 at 5:11 PM
Nice Haiku, Hilda. That's why we need more rain in Texas ... to get rid of all these ants. :-( A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Greenhough Avatar
January 23, 2024 at 6:56 PM
I've heard about the Texas ants from your wife. I guess they are needed, but I don't want them in the house.
Buehler Avatar
January 22, 2024 at 9:56 PM
A fantastic haiku, Hilda. It says so much.
Greenhough Avatar
January 22, 2024 at 10:16 PM
Thank you.
Wolf Avatar
January 22, 2024 at 6:45 PM
Deceptively 'simple.' A world of wisdom in this 'capture of a moment,' Hilda.
Greenhough Avatar
January 22, 2024 at 7:05 PM
Thank you. Your comments are always enjoyed
May Avatar
January 22, 2024 at 1:28 PM
There tunnels keep them dry, I enjoyed your haiku, best wishes
Greenhough Avatar
January 22, 2024 at 1:37 PM
Thank you. Ants are the engineers of the bug world.
Poet Avatar
January 22, 2024 at 6:49 AM
What an astounding insight! How exceptionally well-designed are those anthills? They appear to continue expanding regardless of unrest or devastation!
Greenhough Avatar
January 22, 2024 at 8:11 AM
I try to stay with the Japanese haiku. Thank you.
Jones Avatar
January 22, 2024 at 12:07 AM
What a great observation! How masterfully are those ant hills built! They seem to build bigger even after destruction or disturbance!
Greenhough Avatar
January 22, 2024 at 12:28 AM
Thank you. Ants like to stay warm and dry.
Empress Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 11:01 PM
Ah when it rains even ants disappear yes. What a deep haiku this is dear Hilda its always so nice and refreshing to read your work you are so deep and creative. Sending you light always
Greenhough Avatar
January 22, 2024 at 12:27 AM
Thank you, Ink. I appreciate your comments.
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