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Talented in closing every door and drawer left open by my spouse. Those beastly eyes from childhood; doors and drawers under the bed, too. Talented in tripping and spilling, splashing and controlling (only the remote control - what wife doesn’t like to watch her favorite show?) Talented at staying indoors with piles of books on either side of this couch potato. Nah…I’m not that bad; but I am that good ;) I get outdoors when I know I should. Talented at rolling eyes - well, that is a dated talent, I’ve disguised as a wizened smile, a wink, a walk-away, a sigh, a blink. I don’t oft need eyes in the back of my head either, as I’ve used up most of my early childhood skills. Now I look to see if I’ve encouraged the talents for the ongoing generations - let’s see: Lecturing, check; swift kick in the butt, check. Will I be talented in old age, like using a cane to trip those whippersnappers or racing a wheelchair in traffic. How about removing my teeth when I put my foot in my mouth? Talented, am I? Am I as talented as Jack? He’ll be the judge of that. Support me Jack from the onslaught of attacks, jumping jacks, or other nonsensical topsy-turvy lumberjacks. 5/5/2023

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Date: 5/6/2023 2:53:00 AM
Aren't those open cabinets, drawers, doors to the outside of the house(letting in bugs of all kinds), and so many other things that I could mention that would be too embarrassing annoying. Just wait unto your get in your eighties, then you will see all those at one time happening. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2023 6:24:00 AM
I always tell my hubby close the front door, when he steps out for a moment…lol!
Date: 5/5/2023 11:06:00 PM
Bet he will love it. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2023 6:23:00 AM
Thank you, Victor! Jack is a hoot!
Date: 5/5/2023 7:44:00 PM
Lol. Oh I think he’ll enjoy it as we do too. Good one Kim :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2023 6:22:00 AM
Thank you, Fin!
Date: 5/5/2023 4:58:00 PM
Loved it!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2023 6:01:00 PM
Thank you, Paige!
Date: 5/5/2023 10:45:00 AM
Hello Kim, LOL I think you nailed it. Yes he will like this one. Hugs. /Darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/5/2023 12:00:00 PM
Hello Kim, you are welcome. Hugs. /Darlene\
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2023 11:06:00 AM
Thanks, Darlene!
Date: 5/5/2023 8:51:00 AM
Lol hes a wise old soul Kim, he'll love this one. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2023 9:27:00 AM
Thanks so much, my dear friend! :)

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