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Another Time

Faces pass slowly in the midnight breeze shy eyes lock for a solitary moment hearts race and fireflies flutter at the thought that two old souls could reunite. Bringing back memories of lives and loves lost A shooting star falls in the distance distracting fate for a mere instant history is left in the past spirits drift away awaiting another time another place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/25/2016 7:53:00 AM
Great poem congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/21/2016 1:54:00 PM
This deserves to be read and applauded today,not another time!Congrats Tim!
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Date: 7/21/2016 1:33:00 PM
Tim, Congrats on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting my second Premiere contest. Stop by my latest blog "The Perfect One." Forever **SKAT**
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Date: 7/21/2016 12:43:00 PM
Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/21/2016 11:05:00 AM
This is fascinating and great thought. Congrats on your win. :)
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Date: 7/21/2016 10:12:00 AM
Such beautiful write Tim! I salute you! Congratulations and keep on writing more. You are indeed an inspiration! ;)
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Date: 2/24/2016 5:18:00 PM
Really well expressed Tim.
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Date: 2/19/2016 11:23:00 PM
This is poetry, many layers, and the painted beauty of life!
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Date: 2/19/2016 11:31:00 AM
Wonderful poem my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 2/19/2016 9:47:00 AM
Awaiting another time,another place..Can feel a tinge of sadness ..yet still with a glimpse of hope.I wonder if the spirits are ever happy with the now for what it is - )Life and all we own.. Deep beautiful poem.
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Date: 2/18/2016 6:29:00 PM
I like this one very much, Tim. your poetic skill is glowing.
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Date: 2/18/2016 4:00:00 PM
Alas, I have found a kindred spirit. Whether inflating or deflating love is and always will be the ultimate conquest. You have run the gauntlet with this bittersweet write my friend. Well done and eloquently expressed. A7
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Date: 2/18/2016 8:30:00 AM
Lovely....love the last two lines. Sometimes it's that other time and other place that keeps us going...
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Date: 2/18/2016 8:29:00 AM
The secret of love, that not many seem to consider, is synchronicity, dear Tim! Here we have a negative example of it wrapped in the words of a magnificent poem!
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Date: 2/18/2016 8:20:00 AM
Hi Tim...you manage to combine a lovely poem and the sadness of lost love to reach out to our soul. #7 // paul
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Date: 2/18/2016 3:54:00 AM
ohh traces of soul mate's love with hope of being reunited... so nice, tim!..huggs
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Date: 2/17/2016 11:56:00 PM
Love shooting stars and I love fireflies (sad to say I've only seen them once in my life, though). All of it is so fleeting, but there's hope in your last two lines.
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Date: 2/17/2016 7:59:00 PM
Sad.... But I love it!!.. Well done my friend.. Hugs. Arlene..
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Date: 2/17/2016 4:51:00 PM
Good write!
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