Another Time

There was a time when she lit up in the firmness of youth-- like a rose on an April morn greeting daylight with a petal-soft kiss. And the lively wind rustled her orange pinafore... Oh, a time when she was young innocent . But life's compass denies a woman fresher years , amber hair becomes grey locks of winter— thin as flakes where breaths succumb to chilled murmurings of discontent; the summer flame turning into weary longings. Yet comes another time when the breeze at last returns, to caress a wrinkled face and allow her once lithesome spirit to play on, shrieking giddily, then wailing at flowers from nowhere: through a realm weightless this flight back to childhood quickly dims-- those touch- and- go pleasures unknown by her memory lost, her own name forgotten. Poetry For The Sake Of Poetry Contest Sponsor: john lawless 6/2/2018

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Date: 7/1/2018 7:07:00 AM
Such a beautiful and heartfelt write it is, life can be cruel sometimes, there isn't anything worse than living without any knowledge, so weak to do anything, don't even know your own name, yet alive, living, the heart still goes on, may God gives us a happy life and a easy death, there is no point in living like this, good luck and many congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest, it truly was a joy to read
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Date: 6/29/2018 1:58:00 AM
http://poesis.unaux.com/ A new literary magazine awaits you! The Poesis Literary Magazine seeks poetry for the 2018 first issue. Poesis - http://poesis.unaux.com/ - is an independent, international, free-access literary journal. We are an online journal, exclusively. We accept texts that have already been published, but please specify where they were first published. We publish quarterly, and we accept submissions year-round. We attempt to respond to submissions within twelve weeks. Good luck!
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Date: 6/7/2018 10:24:00 PM
Returning with congratulations, Nette, for your excellent win with your breathtaking and poignant poem. Very moving. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/7/2018 9:49:00 AM
Wow - a very touching poem. Superbly penned, nette. Congrats on your well deserved podium finish.
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Date: 6/7/2018 7:42:00 AM
Beautifully written Nette. Captured the loneliness and fear of Alzheimer's and the the torment of both the sufferer and the caretaker children. Thanks for participating in the contest
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Date: 6/3/2018 6:55:00 AM
Wow! So profound. BRILLINT! SIMPLY BRILLIANT, dear Nette. Sure to top the winner's list. Elaine This one goes to my favs.
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Date: 6/2/2018 10:11:00 AM
The ranting about growing old takes a different spin when Alzheimer's sets in, I assume. And she is a child again! That comes as a poetic surprise distinctly thought of by a very creative artist. Hail to you!
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Date: 6/2/2018 1:28:00 AM
Ah but only a poet can see underneath, and that beauty grows with age, not the reverse!!! Loved this!
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Date: 6/1/2018 11:09:00 PM
What a powerful and touching poem, with such a powerful portrayal of time and loss of youth and memory...excellent! Great write, Nette!
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Date: 6/1/2018 9:05:00 PM
A journey through the seasons of life and the sadness when memory is lost..
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Date: 6/1/2018 3:29:00 PM
Excellent portrait of life as it ages..and recalls younger days..a story well told in tender words..a winning poem, nette.
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Date: 6/1/2018 2:50:00 PM
A breathtaking portrayal so poignantly and poetically perfect in it's spring to winter nuances and emotions. Full of soulful tenderness and beauty, Nette. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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