Another Time

There was a time when she lit up in the firmness of youth-- like a rose on an April morn greeting daylight with a petal-soft kiss. And the lively wind rustled her orange pinafore... Oh, a time when she was young innocent . But life's compass denies a woman fresher years , amber hair becomes grey locks of winter— thin as flakes where breaths succumb to chilled murmurings of discontent; the summer flame turning into weary longings. Yet comes another time when the breeze at last returns, to caress a wrinkled face and allow her once lithesome spirit to play on, shrieking giddily, then wailing at flowers from nowhere: through a realm weightless this flight back to childhood quickly dims-- those touch- and- go pleasures unknown by her memory lost, her own name forgotten. Poetry For The Sake Of Poetry Contest Sponsor: john lawless 6/2/2018
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Ajmal Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 7:07 AM
Such a beautiful and heartfelt write it is, life can be cruel sometimes, there isn't anything worse than living without any knowledge, so weak to do anything, don't even know your own name, yet alive, living, the heart still goes on, may God gives us a happy life and a easy death, there is no point in living like this, good luck and many congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest, it truly was a joy to read
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June 29, 2018 at 1:58 AM
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Ashley Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 10:24 PM
Returning with congratulations, Nette, for your excellent win with your breathtaking and poignant poem. Very moving. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Gauthier Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 9:49 AM
Wow - a very touching poem. Superbly penned, nette. Congrats on your well deserved podium finish.
Lawless Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 7:42 AM
Beautifully written Nette. Captured the loneliness and fear of Alzheimer's and the the torment of both the sufferer and the caretaker children. Thanks for participating in the contest
George   Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 6:55 AM
Wow! So profound. BRILLINT! SIMPLY BRILLIANT, dear Nette. Sure to top the winner's list. Elaine This one goes to my favs.
Vaso Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 1:28 AM
Ah but only a poet can see underneath, and that beauty grows with age, not the reverse!!! Loved this!
Leiser Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 11:09 PM
What a powerful and touching poem, with such a powerful portrayal of time and loss of youth and memory...excellent! Great write, Nette!
May Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 9:05 PM
A journey through the seasons of life and the sadness when memory is lost..
Pandit Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 3:29 PM
Excellent portrait of life as it ages..and recalls younger days..a story well told in tender words..a winning poem, nette.
Ashley Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 2:50 PM
A breathtaking portrayal so poignantly and poetically perfect in it's spring to winter nuances and emotions. Full of soulful tenderness and beauty, Nette. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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