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Another Somewhere

I thought that SOMEWHERE
At some point along life’s line
Our hearts would find each other

Somewhere’s out of reach
You’re entrenched in yesterday
Another SOMEWHERE awaits…

Eileen Manassian Ghali

Copyright © Eileen Manassian | Year Posted 2014

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Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/13/2018 8:59:00 AM I keep being drawn back to this piece. I must confess I don’t remember which poem it inspired me to write. Do you remember? Login to Reply

Honestly J.T. Date: 3/18/2014 2:42:00 AM I thought we'd get to see forever... It's so hard to say goodbye to yesterday. Nice poem Eileen Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 4/1/2014 5:07:00 AM JT...thanks so much for passing by and visiting me. I've fallen behind in answering posts, it seems. Hope all is well with you. Thanks so much for your kind words. Hugs

Poet Tacito Date: 2/28/2014 12:32:00 AM A heartbeat's distraction, irregular to the other halves' smile. Deep, deep inside a romantic conundrum. Damn. Fine job. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 4/1/2014 5:08:00 AM Hey you!! I've missed your DAMNS! HA HA! Hugs, my dear....oh, and thanks for being a sweetie pie.

Painted Hunter Date: 2/26/2014 10:49:00 AM Soulful. Your poetry always is. I'd bend to give you a bow but I might not be able to get back up again...;)..ha Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 2/26/2014 10:52:00 AM Oh dear Caleb.....That's ok. Consider it...DONE! ;) Thanks, dear.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/26/2014 10:00:00 AM I added your poem name as a dedication at the end of my poem. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 2/26/2014 10:04:00 AM Richard....this is such a privilege. To think this poem sparked something that brought about that beauty. I'm humbled and delighted!

Chris Boskovski Date: 2/25/2014 11:33:00 PM We are all looking for that some one, some in the future, others in the present, and most in the past! Someday that love will come and join you with another! A powerful and lovely write! I enjoyed it my Persian Queen! :) xoxoxo Have a good day! Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 2/26/2014 10:54:00 AM The PERSIAN QUEEN is grateful for your visit and lovely post, Chris. Thanks ever so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this write. Hugs.

Carrie Richards Date: 2/25/2014 7:43:00 PM I do believe we are all looking for that "somewhere" .......even if we are living dead center of it already . Love this sedoka!!! Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 2/25/2014 9:30:00 PM Sweet of you to visif and post, Carrie....hugs

Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/25/2014 3:51:00 PM This poem inspired the poem I wrote this morning. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 2/25/2014 4:39:00 PM OH WOW!!!! I was hoping that was the case! I'm thrilled!!!

Ken Carroll Date: 2/25/2014 3:32:00 PM So much said with so few words Eileen.. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 2/25/2014 5:02:00 PM Thanks for passing by, Ken....Hope all is well.

Nette Onclaud Date: 2/25/2014 9:22:00 AM lovley, lovely thoughts creating a mood of distance yet maybe, in time, a bridge building togetherness.. smashing, eileen.. huggs Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 2/25/2014 2:25:00 PM Yes, Nette....This is a poem about bridges to forgiveness....It's so sad when someone isn't able to let go of a past grievance and give a second chance...sometimes...you just have to realize that it's not meant to be and...MOVE ON. Thanks for the visit. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/25/2014 8:07:00 AM Somewhere is reachable with our imaginations. Within our minds us poets live many lives. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 2/25/2014 2:26:00 PM Richard....this is like your poem....I see this post reflected in your poem...Absolutely awesome! :) Thank you....I can't live without my poems...Sometimes...I just want to throw in the towel...It feels like I'm not going anywhere...not improving....but...my poetry is my soul, my dreams, my aspirations....Me...living many lives. Thanks for visiting!!! :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/25/2014 7:32:00 AM A philosophic dawn in your writing that defuses the light of your spirit! Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 2/25/2014 2:27:00 PM What a lovely post from you, Demetri. Thanks ever so much for giving me this glorious compliment. I'm unworthy but thrilled!

Ilene Bauer Date: 2/24/2014 8:55:00 PM i like this poem, eileen - there's so much contained in these six short lines! well done... Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 2/25/2014 2:30:00 PM I've written one or two using this form. I find it effective when I don't want to belabor a point! ;) Thanks for the visit, my dear.

Richard D Seal Date: 2/24/2014 6:00:00 PM Deeeeeep and very moving write my little Desert Orchid, I hope whoever this person is they find the one they're looking for. Lovingly written piece. Take care, Richard Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 2/25/2014 2:32:00 PM Sometimes, Mr Seal....things are just not meant to be...In that last line lies the secret....Another somewhere awaits. Another point along the line will perhaps reveal a truer heart. It's hard to make amends when hearts break....Sometimes...you can only move on....thanks for your visit....I so love having you pass by here. It makes me happy. So....Keep visiting...Will have something sweet to offer you!