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Another Phase

northern lights glisten
quavering on ailing ice…
warming seas approach

© Harry J Horsman 2022

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 1/29/2022 9:18:00 AM

Hello hh - Be it good or bad there will always be a new or rotating phase. Your words are vivid as always and as always you make us readers pause... Remain safe and may this day find you well. May any phase be for the good...

Susan Lawrence

Date: 1/22/2022 8:43:00 AM

Harry, I see it and feel the change….. haunting in its description. You say so much with a few words . Bravo ! Hugs, Susan :)

Paul Callus

Date: 1/22/2022 5:00:00 AM

Global warming is bound to bring many changes along with it; that ailing ice could cause many problems in the not too far future. ~ Regards // paul

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/21/2022 2:30:00 AM

Don't you just love it when that warm sea arrives clothing you with warmth and heat, after your tired bones have had enough of winter, I do ! Love and prayers for your health and well being Harry xo

Joseph May

Date: 1/20/2022 7:38:00 PM

Well stated Harry.. best wishes

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2022 1:16:00 PM

Another phase indeed. Clever, harry

P.S. Awtry

Date: 1/20/2022 7:31:00 AM

I agree with others that second line says so much. :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/19/2022 11:33:00 PM

I like all the lines. Panagiota

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/19/2022 6:31:00 PM

I know I read this and thought I made a comment Harry. Your second line is genius, making this haiku exceptional! Bravo! Blessings xxoo

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/19/2022 12:41:00 PM

Harry, your haiku is masterfully composed. Kudos to your efforts.

Anil Deo

Date: 1/19/2022 11:08:00 AM

"Ailing ice,."Good. Nice. Thx for visiting me Sir Harry.

I Am Anaya

Date: 1/19/2022 10:20:00 AM

Sterling imagery, pity the polar bears!

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/19/2022 4:45:00 AM

Really nice images conjured with this one Harry! Well done!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/19/2022 4:44:00 AM

Good Morning Harry, hope you are fine this morning. I wanted to stop by yesterday, but I left to quick. You are definitely one of the poets I seek when I randomly decide to pop in. Can I please compare myself with your haiku. I'm actually going through something right now. However, I'm on another phase. I pray the numbness goes away. I like the imagery of a warm sea. The line here is beautiful. Always a pleasure to stop by. Forever A Fan ~LINDA~