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Another Petrarchan Sonnet, Picture Perfect

softly swift, along in threes, battalions fierce, would grind the wind. the grandeur of glory great, could savour each victory's fate. arrayed in lines, for wars cut, soldiers set in uniforms. adorned and armed to their teeth, with gloved up hands, booted feet. Marching Seasons, the war times, a great army, with more behind. trembling earth, meek fields of war, nature humbled, nature blurred by armies great, who rivers dry, and wield emblems; glorified. Another Petrarchan Sonnet Picture Perfect

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Date: 4/22/2016 5:37:00 PM
Thrilling!
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Date: 3/20/2014 5:17:00 AM
Well penned write and congratulations on the fine win, dominic
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Dominic Amezimi
Date: 3/26/2014 9:15:00 PM
Thaaaannnkk you! i am humbled Dr. Ram Mehta! pls come again!
Date: 3/20/2014 4:40:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest sponsored by Giorgio A.V. - A wonderful win poem from you Dominic ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/26/2014 9:16:00 PM
Thanks so much Anne! -oxox// Dominic
Date: 3/20/2014 1:06:00 AM
Dominic, Congrats, awesome win! ~SKAT~
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Dominic Amezimi
Date: 3/26/2014 9:17:00 PM
Lovely comment SKAT... well appreciated, much love, Dom!
Date: 3/19/2014 11:01:00 PM
Dominic, Impressive like the themes. Congratulations on your win. :) Love ~LINDA
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Date: 3/26/2014 9:24:00 PM
No Problem DOM... :)
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Dominic Amezimi
Date: 3/26/2014 9:19:00 PM
Hey you, thanks alot, also read some of your writes in here... you are equally impressive you know! thanks again Poet Destroyer A, and pls don't destroy me #lol
Date: 11/6/2013 7:40:00 AM
I like the rhythm of this one..Interesting topic that you have chosen about which to write..I enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Dominic Amezimi
Date: 11/9/2013 12:22:00 AM
Anytime Sara, and it would have been in place for me to have thanked you first! encouraging comment!
Date: 4/3/2013 7:08:00 AM
Nice description in you poem.
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Dominic Amezimi
Date: 4/4/2013 2:48:00 AM
i really appreciate the comment, thank you!

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