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Another Memory 3-3-10

The dark lit up by hazel eyes, and smiles like the sun at night, curtains fall of dark; of light, threads of silky hair, unwavering, a gazing stare, fingers brush blushing skin, so close, yet still untouching, small pink lips, pursed so light, wishing for a forbidden kiss tonight, but yonder there, the horn is blared, and rushed, must break the loving stare, cheek to lips, few words are said, but, i love you and sweet dreams in bed, the doors fast slammed, and walk away, goodbye love, till another day, the glow remains, though distance grows, another memory, hearts close will hold...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/9/2010 9:27:00 AM
I love the imagry here rain, It is just amazing: D. It is so beautifully writen, your a true poet= )<3 Emily
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Date: 3/5/2010 6:35:00 AM
i love your poem....please when you go on go to chat ? we need to talk about something. i got your facebook info and if you can go on later that would be great how about 5.
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Date: 3/3/2010 10:36:00 AM
this is an amazing poem great use of words to make this a very powerful poem good work keep it up
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Date: 3/3/2010 9:43:00 AM
Wow!!! Amazing Rain. I LOVE the imagery in this. Very bery nice. Great expression of love,no more like passion. Really great!
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