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Onomatopoeia Haiku

Thunder rumbled sky Pitter-patter of raindrops A fire crackles

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/18/2024 1:14:00 AM

Loved the element of onomatopoeia. Splendid haiku.

Edward Wraith
Date: 6/18/2024 7:48:00 AM

Thank you Victor. Appreciate your feedback my friend. Have a wonderful day

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 6/16/2024 12:58:00 AM

Your haiku brings a scene to life. It was enjoyable to read.

Edward Wraith
Date: 6/16/2024 6:21:00 AM

Hi Hilda, thank you for stopping by and perusing my pennings. It pleases me greatly that you found enjoyment in this little trifle. Wishing you a blessed day

Ink Empress

Date: 6/16/2024 12:20:00 AM

Very picturesque and powerful haiku! Well delivered! Can see through those words. I especially love “a fire crackles” love that! Thunderstorms scare me; and can seem freaky for me but you make thunder too sounds beautiful! Pleasure reading this: sending you light

Edward Wraith
Date: 6/16/2024 6:25:00 AM

Mother Nature never ceases to amaze me. I do love a good thunderstorm, and a warm fire. Your kind comment and gift of light is well received. Thank you Ink. Have a blessed day

Sally Eslinger

Date: 6/15/2024 5:05:00 PM

Hi Edward! I think this haiku is Very splendid! I felt, saw, heard it! At fire was a comforting warm aha at the end. Quite a real experience you created for me… sally

Edward Wraith
Date: 6/15/2024 6:21:00 PM

Ha ha!! Then it worked! You got the onomatopoeia Sally. Thank you so much for sharing that experience with me. Like this crackling fire, your response and kind words have warmed this old soul. May enchantment find you this evening.

I Am Anaya

Date: 6/15/2024 1:21:00 PM

Rumples, crackles love descriptions that make us feel it. There are no set rules on caps for Haikus. They are used more often as two form poems, I've noticed. Very nice, Edward!

Edward Wraith
Date: 6/15/2024 2:55:00 PM

I see you share the same affections for the Haiku as I do. I feel they are underrated, underestimated and under appreciated. I love the power in brevity and controlled conciseness that strip away the prompts, while opening up the imagination.