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Onomatopoeia Haiku

Another Haiku

   

  Thunder rumbled sky
Pitter-patter of raindrops
       A fire crackles

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Victor Buhagiar

June 18, 2024 at 1:14 AM

Loved the element of onomatopoeia. Splendid haiku.

Edward Wraith

June 18, 2024 at 7:48 AM

Thank you Victor. Appreciate your feedback my friend. Have a wonderful day

Hilda Greenhough

June 16, 2024 at 12:58 AM

Your haiku brings a scene to life. It was enjoyable to read.

Edward Wraith

June 16, 2024 at 6:21 AM

Hi Hilda, thank you for stopping by and perusing my pennings. It pleases me greatly that you found enjoyment in this little trifle. Wishing you a blessed day

Ink Empress

June 16, 2024 at 12:20 AM

Very picturesque and powerful haiku! Well delivered! Can see through those words. I especially love “a fire crackles” love that! Thunderstorms scare me; and can seem freaky for me but you make thunder too sounds beautiful! Pleasure reading this: sending you light

Edward Wraith

June 16, 2024 at 6:25 AM

Mother Nature never ceases to amaze me. I do love a good thunderstorm, and a warm fire. Your kind comment and gift of light is well received. Thank you Ink. Have a blessed day

Sally Eslinger

June 15, 2024 at 5:05 PM

Hi Edward! I think this haiku is Very splendid! I felt, saw, heard it! At fire was a comforting warm aha at the end. Quite a real experience you created for me… sally

Edward Wraith

June 15, 2024 at 6:21 PM

Ha ha!! Then it worked! You got the onomatopoeia Sally. Thank you so much for sharing that experience with me. Like this crackling fire, your response and kind words have warmed this old soul. May enchantment find you this evening.

I Am Anaya

June 15, 2024 at 1:21 PM

Rumples, crackles love descriptions that make us feel it. There are no set rules on caps for Haikus. They are used more often as two form poems, I've noticed. Very nice, Edward!

Edward Wraith

June 15, 2024 at 2:55 PM

I see you share the same affections for the Haiku as I do. I feel they are underrated, underestimated and under appreciated. I love the power in brevity and controlled conciseness that strip away the prompts, while opening up the imagination.

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