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Another Day In Paradise

Towns lay in ashes as soldiers marched to the sound of defeat

Clowns mocked surrender and wiped mascara off sooty cheeks

Frowns disguised shrapnel of eyeshadows in languishing tears

Gowns shredded doubts and hope when a bugle blessed the meek


Swords pointed to power conquest when the crowd counted demise

Chords draped around dangled from trees to deter any rebellion

Lord’s message in tatters within realms of madness’ resurrection

Hoards of dismembered dreams applauded proud victor’s medallion


Feasts of slaughter rape pillage and murder seeded on crushed bones

Priests blessed an altar of battle cries to end wars of glorious nations

Beasts fed on human carrion as vultures spread torn sacred flesh

East’s dawning of sunshine smouldered in corpses for fast consecration


Fires reflected in hollow eyes distorted the rise of conscience in prayer

Desires glimmered one final breath on the way to moribund elation

Suppliers of money and weapons cheered cripples and rocketing shares

Friars and liars however were torched as purveyors of deadly salvation



01st February 2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 2/10/2020 2:08:00 PM
Kai, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write _Constance
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Date: 2/9/2020 1:13:00 PM
The ravages and the horror of war. you certainly painted it well here, Kai. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 2/1/2020 5:18:00 PM
This is both so barren and so powerful, a message vital and provocative-
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 2/3/2020 4:29:00 AM
Thank you Michelle. Barren fields are fertile. Kind wishes, Kai

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