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Another Day

Young boy, somewhat aloof Growing up an orphan Feeling alone and lost Different always so From all your little friends Age one, lost your father Hardly knew any different Had to figure things out On your own at all times Wishing he would be near To teach you right from wrong Having a model, more Than a still photo mute Silent and steely eyes That had no words for you Wishing for memories Of times spent together Discussions or even Remembering his voice Fathers’ Day being just Another empty day AP: 2nd place 2020 Posted January 5, 2018

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Date: 1/5/2018 10:09:00 PM
So sad, but so well-said, Line! Janice
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Date: 1/6/2018 8:51:00 AM
Thank you, Janice. Very appreciated.
Date: 1/5/2018 9:43:00 PM
lovely in its desolation, line... what a greeat work!..huggs
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Date: 1/6/2018 8:50:00 AM
Thanks, nette. Much appreciated. Best wishes.

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