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Another Chance

Love can be so elusive like a star wished upon by my heart May another one pass by

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Chris Green

Date: 10/31/2016 11:16:00 AM

Such a beautiful thought poetically expressed. Allow me one more chance, one more wish to fulfill my hearts desire. Wonderfully done.

Carol B.

Date: 10/29/2016 3:19:00 PM

May your sky light up with many twinkling stars to wish upon :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 10/31/2016 1:02:00 AM

Ty, Carol. Such a nice thing to say. I appreciate the words of support. Love you so much. RW

Paloma P

Date: 10/29/2016 6:54:00 AM

Not familiar with Kimo, I'll have to research it, nonetheless, this is stunning!

Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 10/31/2016 1:01:00 AM

Ty, Paloma. Love the kind words. I like this form, it suits me well. Give it a whirl and see how you like it. Love always, RW.

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/29/2016 6:27:00 AM

Simply beautiful with just a hint of sadness, Freddie:)

Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 10/31/2016 12:57:00 AM

Ty, Daniel. Like the late and great Luther Vandross said, loneliness is always such a sad affair. Appreciate the kind words, my friend. Love and peace to you. RW

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/28/2016 9:42:00 PM

I love this one, Freddie. Just my kind of kimo!!

Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 10/31/2016 12:59:00 AM

Ty, Andrea. I like the kimo, it is good therapy for the soul. Love you, lady. RW

White Wolf

Date: 10/28/2016 9:21:00 PM

Haven't seen this form before RW! Nicely penned my friend, now I'm off to look up Kimo? Haha...

Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 10/28/2016 9:32:00 PM

Ty, Rick. I was reading another poet's work and they did it in this form. It was intriguing, so I gave it a go. Love you, bro. RW

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/28/2016 8:38:00 PM

Hi Freddie, I agree love can be elusive. But one must keep on wishing on star. Because love will eventually come. I enjoyed the read:-) Alexis

Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 10/31/2016 1:00:00 AM

Ty for the sage advice, Alexis. I'll keep hanging in there, too many beautiful women out there to ever lose hope, right. Love you, dear. RW