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I was lower than low with no clue which way to go. Thanksgiving was quickly approaching and I needed to tell my son, without showing woe, that there would be no turkey for roasting. I felt like an adult failure unworthy of a savior. Never in my grown life had I known such strife and my money anxiety was thick enough to knife. On the morn I determined to tell my son, an unexpected check came via the U.S. mail and relief winds lifted my hopes into a sail. I rushed to my bank to make the deposit, then straight to shopping for our food closet. At the checkout, I crashed and burned as my emotions were again angst-turned. Card Declined – and tears had me blind as I asked the cashier to watch my cart while I drove for info my bank might depart. I learned when your funds are a sad balance banks are horribly strict and even callus. I had little money so I could not have my money for five banking days and that induced a haze where new tears fell followed by a numb-daze. I stumble-drove back to my cart and the store to tell them sorry, but I was way too poor and would return all items to their place. The cashier listened with a smile on her face and when she spoke, I was lifted by grace: The woman who had been behind me in line had bought all in my cart and it was mine. I do not remember this stranger’s face, but will forever bear her kindness embrace ~~ My own angel had anchored me among the faithful. ... CayCay April 18, 2018

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Date: 6/6/2018 10:44:00 PM
Kindness and compassion are such beautiful Elements of Love. It's too bad and so sad that we don't see more acts of these qualities, because they always renew and replenish faith in the kindness and decency humanity possesses when humans are so inclined to carry them out. A beautiful uplifting poem, CayCay. Congrats on your win. All the best to you. :) ~ Artsie
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Date: 5/8/2018 11:35:00 AM
CayCay, back with congratulations on your win. hugs
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Date: 5/8/2018 8:58:00 AM
Oh, what a touching story about your angel, CayCay! It filled my heart with empathy and finally joy when your angel saved you! Congrats on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/8/2018 1:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win,CayCay.
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Date: 5/7/2018 8:52:00 PM
A lovely story, CayCay. So Sweet and much deserving of a win.
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Date: 5/7/2018 7:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Could feel the emotional pain in this situation. Or I'm remembering my own when this happened to me in much the same way. You told this beautifully.
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Date: 4/21/2018 2:22:00 PM
Knock knock! Hark an angel appears! My loyalty requires looking you up. Going nutz here with all the toil. Wrote you an email though. Your.poem: delicously narrative and tender. Same thing happened here. Couldnt get to a customer and at the garage my neighbour filled my tank and gave me R1000. Lately I am showered with blessings. Soon I will be freer Love J
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Date: 4/21/2018 11:12:00 AM
What a wonderful story my friend, best wishes. John
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Date: 4/19/2018 2:51:00 AM
Wow, an amazing story caycay, there are truly angels amongst us. Beautiful story. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 4/18/2018 9:20:00 PM
Awesome story, CayCay, Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/18/2018 6:00:00 PM
wow wow wow CayCay what an awesome thing to happen, there are some real angels out there with a heart of gold:-) i hope this places really well for you in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 4/18/2018 6:06:00 PM
As a true story, it was very hard to summarize. I'm glad to know you made it thru the 'length.' Thank you for your upbeat comments - I love having them. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

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