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Angry winds blew my dreams away, filling my heart with winter snow. Finding love, I've lost it today, angry winds blew my dreams away. I sent my lover on his way, I truly wish it were not so. Angry winds blew my dreams away, filling my heart with winter snow. I truly wish it were not so, for I now regret each tear shed and dread the fact I let him go. I truly wish it were not so, he begged to stay, yet I said no. My temper flared from things he'd said, I truly wish it were not so, for I now regret each tear shed. I sit at my window and sigh, Always hopeful that he’d walk by. My heart craves to see him once more, Sauntering along, as before. Oh, if only dreams could come true, Regrettably, they seldom do. Romantic dreamers chase rainbows, Yearning for love that never shows. (Intertwining Triolet /Acrostic)

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Date: 5/15/2018 7:40:00 PM
Cool way to incorporate such a meaningful acrostic, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/16/2018 8:46:00 AM
Thank you so much Line, your comments are most appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/24/2017 11:30:00 AM
Well done - a blend of sorrow, frustration and anxiousness. You take the reader through a range of feelings - like life and love will do.
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Date: 3/24/2017 6:38:00 PM
Thanks Kevin, I appreciate your visit and encouraging support, Emile.
Date: 3/18/2017 5:13:00 PM
Emile, I love the triolet form and your triolet is excellent! Combining the acrostic with the triolet worked great! I enjoyed reading your deeply emotive write! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 3/18/2017 5:47:00 PM
Thank you Kim, for taking the time and care to give me this truly wonderful review, Emile.
Date: 3/6/2017 12:44:00 PM
wow Emile, very well done , full of emotion. Excellent addition of the acrostic at the end.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/6/2017 3:58:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, I appreciate your support, Emile.

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