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A Niggling Grumble soon Expands, I get Riled! Right! I’m now Seething, so Expect me to Snap! Light Up The Page 3 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Joseph May 3/17/19

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Line Gauthier

Date: 4/1/2019 10:53:00 PM

Good one, Jan. Smooth flow. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/28/2019 4:36:00 PM

Your double Lanterne is very expressive, Jan! I'd have placed this in the first group. Congratulations on a very merited podium finish. Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 3/28/2019 4:58:00 PM

Thanks Paul, I am grateful to be on the winners list:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/27/2019 2:09:00 PM

- Congratulations on a great win, Jan :) -

Jan Allison
Date: 3/27/2019 2:13:00 PM

Thanks Anne-lise it takes a lot to make me really angry - it rarely happens what I despise more than anything is being lied to:-( hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 3/26/2019 8:44:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your awesome win. Hugs Eve ~`*

Jan Allison
Date: 3/27/2019 2:12:00 PM

thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2019 5:37:00 PM

way to go in the contest Jan. I think it would have read better if you had put an exclamation point after Right! REad it to see what i mean. I am wanting to go to "right now..."

Jan Allison
Date: 3/26/2019 5:42:00 PM

True Andrea I'll amend it now:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 3/26/2019 5:14:00 PM

Love the photo you used with this write Jan...Nicely done...Congrats on your win

Jan Allison
Date: 3/26/2019 5:19:00 PM

Thanks Joseph:-) It takes an awful lot to make me angry I usually end up making a joke of something and after my husbands cancer you get a different prospective on life - the one thing that irritates me more than anything is being lied to:-( hugs jan xx