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All I want to do is kick you hard in the goolies! Now is NOT the time to say you’re going on a fishing trip with the lads Good grief, I have to endure your mother staying here for a week Every single thing I do or say she finds fault with Right now I am seething!!!!!!!!! Fiction poem for Nina's Emotions Contest 2/12/19

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Debjani Mitra

Date: 2/15/2019 2:13:00 AM

What a perfect description in so few words...and the matching pic ..the poem touches Jan ..Congrats.. Thanks for visiting my poems

Jan Allison
Date: 2/15/2019 2:28:00 AM

Thanks Deb:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2019 8:19:00 PM

haha, you really came through with this one, Jan. Such a cute trick doing it acrostic form too. Big congrats to you.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/14/2019 3:46:00 AM

thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/13/2019 6:23:00 PM

Fishing trip? - No!... Golf outing! - Yes! Her hubby just wasn't thinking clearly, I guess! LOL. MEN -- Ugh! (Don't forget that I'm at least 49% female). LOL again Congrats on your win in the contest, Jan! :) gw

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/15/2019 4:40:00 PM

Actually, Nina, it's blind chromosomal luck!! (Nyuk, nyuk)! LOL ~ Gershon

Jan Allison
Date: 2/13/2019 6:54:00 PM

lol GW do you play golf or fish i wonder lol:-) hugs jan xx

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/13/2019 6:10:00 PM

Jan, I love how the anger in this poem is expressed with both conviction and wit. Awesome! Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Jan Allison
Date: 2/13/2019 6:54:00 PM

thanks Susan:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser

Date: 2/13/2019 4:39:00 PM

Live the humorous perspective in this gem, Jan! Congrats on your win! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/13/2019 4:43:00 PM

I wanted to bring humour into the poem Laura!!:-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/13/2019 3:58:00 PM

Back with well deserved congrats on your win, Jan. Bravo.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/13/2019 4:32:00 PM

thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Fj Thomas

Date: 2/13/2019 11:30:00 AM

The goolies even! Lol that's a new one for me Jan. Hello Lady, hope you and the hubby are okay.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/13/2019 1:01:00 PM

oh my sweet friend as you can see I am still trying to bring a bit of fun to the site. have missed you so much hope you are well and the little fella is still making you smile:-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless

Date: 2/13/2019 9:25:00 AM

Jan, there is an old adage that states: "Give a man a fish and you feed him for a day" - "Teach a man to fish and his wife will eventually leave him"....hehheeee

Jan Allison
Date: 2/13/2019 1:00:00 PM

lol John:-) hugs Jan xx

Bobby May

Date: 2/13/2019 4:30:00 AM

LOL JAN, this maybe fiction as you say but I am sure this has happened lol great Job!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/13/2019 12:59:00 PM

I am sure it has happened Bobby!:-) hugs Jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/13/2019 1:56:00 AM

So he takes off on a fishing trip and leaves his mother with you? No wonder you're so angry, Jan! Enjoyed, Carolyn

Jan Allison
Date: 2/13/2019 2:35:00 AM

Pure fiction for the contest - I don't have any in laws and hubby doesn't go fishing lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/12/2019 7:20:00 PM

The joys of in-laws. Anger Management therapy is a booming business. LOL

Jan Allison
Date: 2/13/2019 2:35:00 AM

glad its fictional Line!:-) hugs Jan xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/12/2019 6:03:00 PM

Wonderful write, my friend; I was a believer until I read your other comments.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/12/2019 6:16:00 PM

oh pure fiction indeed in so so many ways lol it was fun to go to the dark side lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 2/12/2019 5:43:00 PM

Masterful opening line! Plus you found a very appropriate photo to express anger! My late Welsh wife was all about, "exploding" rather than letting the pot boil, so she would applaud this, too! Aloha, Rico!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/12/2019 5:55:00 PM

Thanks Rico I just had fun with the poem its pure fiction for me:-) hugs Jan xx

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/12/2019 5:25:00 PM

Hello Jan, I hope this poem wins the contest. have a nice evening my friend.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/12/2019 5:27:00 PM

thanks Darlene, its a premier contest so places will be limited but it was fun to write!:-) hugs Jan xx

Bette Bavington

Date: 2/12/2019 3:46:00 PM

Good poem. The only advise I have is the thing I have always been told do unto others as you would like them to do unto you. I have lived by this golden rule. I will keep you in my prayers. I do hope all goes well.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/12/2019 3:48:00 PM

It's pure fiction for a contest Bette, I don't have any in laws and my hubby doesn't go fishing:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/12/2019 3:41:00 PM

Someone is not a happy bunny lol Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 2/12/2019 3:47:00 PM

lol Tom pure fiction for Nina's contest I hope I got the anger emotion over lol:-) hugs Jan xx