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Angels Danced, For Luloo

It was Christmas Eve and your father looked at his watch praying beyond hope that you would not be born exactly at midnight. According to superstition that would make you a witch by birth. The year was 1929 and you popped out of your mothers womb at 11:45, making a good man very happy, alongside an exhausted wife. You turned out to be a healer and a miracle worker. Spending your days helping those in need. When it was time to go home, on that warm day of August, you just slipped away quietly into the night leaving behind my daughtered heart and your untarnished halo. they opened their wings then clanged tambourines of gold as you ascended September 5, 2019

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Date: 9/10/2019 11:26:00 AM
A magical melancholy piece. Well expressed dear one.
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Date: 9/9/2019 8:52:00 AM
Such sweet words my friend...greatly enjoyed reading Pix...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 9/6/2019 4:21:00 PM
I adore the 'tambourines of gold' line - just lovely-
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Date: 9/5/2019 7:27:00 AM
This was very beatitude, a little sad but so well written. Loved this story.
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